Don't be So Proud - Reviews

So after reading the entire story (995 chapters) here are my thoughtsthe story is barely "ok"its fighting scenes are pathetic and feels like turn base games instead of a real fight.MC at some point has so many xxxxxxxxx% more damage and yyyyyyyyy% weak stats for monster that its a wonder why the hell the mobs are still standing in his presence. its really stupid.the RL part of the story is ok.I have to say...the story could had been ok if the fighting scenes were interesting but are pathetic. you can skip them most of the time and go for the ending.most of the quest are done but in a very rush way at the end of the story. so again way too lame. at least it has an ending.the story is similar to sword god and legendary guardian but i'll put this below both.P.S.: its a miracle that those guys still have the chapters even though they died so many times and those were suppose to drop on dead 100% chance

Helps companions and family?  LoL he can't even help himself and still saying he will help others??  ?????                           

Not my favourite story from the author but it's fun to pass time and update schedule is great. Might drop later if the story doesn't interest me. It's not to my taste

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Invisible dragon:uuu…no! it's a lie! i can't believe it!

He began to dig a hole into the ground as he said, "Even if you are a notorious man, how could I bear to let your body be food for the wild beasts and birds when you have tried to ask for my help? Since you have died, everything should be buried under the earth."

「...hia?　...っ!?」

believe that Jesus is the Son of God. That truth is clear to us today because those in Luther's time

It didn't take long for them to get to the scene and they all saw it clearly. It looked like it came from something that belongs to the dog family, only a bit bigger.

Mereka berdua pun masuk ke dalam rumah, "assalamu alaikum…" ucap Jeni dan Rezza.

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

Hello guys, this is the author, Immortal Shades.I accidentally slapped my laptop out of frustration and it's no longer functioning.I will postpone posting for a while until I get my laptop fixed or buy a new one.I'm very sorry for the inconvenience.