Dominating the apocalypse - Reviews

This is an amazing fic, my main gripe with it is the fact that mc is ridiculously lucky, I haven't been able to read past chap 84 due to them being locked but I really loved everything that came before. I just find it odd that he gets the best gear and is generally the most gifted character in the game yet he hasn't even been playing for more than 2 months. The writing quality is decent enough with a few grammar mistakes and characters talk a bit too much because of run on sentences.Stability of updates is decent. Not much else to say here.Story development is amazing, you slowly integrate new pieces of information into the game-verse and expand upon the lore.Character design is pretty meh, not 1-d but certainly not 3-d. It seems there will also be a tough-girl jade beauty in Frey.World background like I said is very decent. Nothing else to say except for the fact that the plot is pretty T H I C C.All in all an amazing novel and it was certainly enough to motivate me to create an account.

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It's good, it's funny and I guess some f#cking guys dislike it but it's great to me. Pretty good and entertaining, second best of the current trial read selection for me but still amazing!

IF for some reason, this doesn't get chosen, i am leaving this site forever.... this is what is needed now that LOHP is coming to an end....

Woah! Woah! Woah! Bishop's nemesis you're at it again! Another master piece?A wonderful and interesting start, it's good and incredible. Am awaiting your updates lol!

Hello, I did that author noshame thing,I give 5 stars because I love my own story, and I hype with my own story. Here is what you will get from this story: -Character development-Kids MC that strong and smart-Romance-Medieval era setting-Quite complicated power system-Action with sword and magic-Moral ValueAnd here is what you SHOULD NOT expect from this story-Good grammar (For people who are very biased with grammar, you can skip it, this is my first novel, and English is not my first language. You can judge my English just by reading this review, I merely bad at punctuation and poor choice of words. Cnc is welcome, I want to improve, and I will)-Harem (Maybe multiple girl will have love interests toward MC, but this is NOT harem)-Lemon (this story is 18+ because of its violence and gore)

Locked fanfic. Do you even need any other comments? And locked since chapter 20... That's a new level of greed

I shouldn’t be impatient and should follow the MC determination BUT!This novel need more recognition!Sure, 1 million is a lot but for me, it’s not…

This is a fantastic book. I'm really a fan of the idea of the plot. its been long since I've seen someone write this kind of novel and I really appreciate it. Thank you author, for this fantastic book.

"I know. He's been expecting you." The elfin woman replied without looking up from her computer.

"Oi, he's moving again."