Hello Author-san here ;)This is my first novel and plot development is a bit slow because I want it to be as detailed as possible. So please bear with me. ^W^
Vocabulary is terrible and the writing is elementary. Just about every chapter the mc say "WHAAT" or such. Mc is only child that doesn't have a magic core which makes him useless but his grandfather doesn't give up on him and continues to train him in willpower pretty much to use him as an experiment. Kid trains it up unlocks awesome power yadda yadda. If the grammar was better the story would be better but I catch myself just scanning the chapters. Would not recommend it unless you can find absolutely nothing that interests you.
Grammer is terrible idk why people said the authors english was good, this is torture just can't stand it. Story is ok if cliche but feels forced when author breaks the 4th wall all the time.
I love sc-fi and this series is great for bothe people just getting into the genre and those who have loved it for years. Great job to author for the Grammer, and pacing of the story. Highly Recommend, keep up the great work.
It's early, but it has a solid start, a slightly fast pace, the writing is good and the idea is great, as it's a football work it has my full support and reading time, I hope for more chapters.
Don't drop it &gghhhhhhbbvvgh****kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk(kkkkkkkkkjjjkjjjkkknhgffcbhhvfffgghhvvcffggghhhvv:bhhjbvcffesxcbjiihf£cvbjjhvvbjokhgvvggggggggggggggggghjjjhhhbvvfuckkkkkkkkkkjjjjjjjkjhhhggbkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjjjjjjjjjjjj
It looked like it might have been a bit interesting.Until I actually started to read it.The sentence formation, the grammar is all not up to par.Needs a lot of improvement.....
You finally make it to your door ready to just collapse on your bed after a long hard day but instead of being greeted by a soft and warm bed you are greeted by a man covered in chains shrouded by a dark mist.
"It was hard to put a finger on it but Daniel was different from all the other babies I had ever seen. He would not cry nor make a mess, and when he was left alone he would always try to escape his room. I'm going to miss this eccentric fellow" she sighed.
