Dirk, and the Black & Orange Catwomen of Betelgeuse VI - Reviews

Story has a decent pace so it doesn't feel slow, but the author needs to go back and fix all the inaccuracies with names and genders they change practically every other sentence. For example the MC's name changes three time in one page or something is clearly stated that its a boy then it gets called a girl for half the page only to be called a boy again please fix this so that I can continue reading until then I unfortunately won't be able to continue the book as I'm too tired trying to figure who is who or what instead of focusing on the story.

Raw Title: 时停五百年Status: 464 Chapters (Complete).....As compared to other Chinese novels, it is way shorter................................

Overall the story is well written, the characters have personalities that I quiet like, the progress of the story is not slow and not too fast. Some part of the story might be a little cliched but I still like it. Some of the other reviewers also said so. The only bad thing i have about the book is the stability of the updates. I dont know what is the schedules of the updates. I dont know why this book is low ranked but it is a very good book that needs to have a stable updates. I hope in the future you will prioritize this book along with the other book of yours.

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What an amazing and life lesson story, be grateful to God for what you have , so that your blessing will give everlasting happiness and not a short happiness and everlasting sorrow ..

Good start Mr. Gagan.This story work should not only  ends up to this level, but goes for higher level for lyrics writing. And your name should be rememberd to each and every person.

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It had been four days since Helix had returned home. Finding only a few cans and two bottles of water, his sanity running thin. It wasn't enough and he wasn't going to risk another day without food for his mother and younger sister, Henna. They were all severely underweight and who knows what disease they may have caught at this point. They were running low on supplies again, and so were his options.

He wept as he spoke and every one pitied him. But Medon and the bard Phemius had now woke up, and came to them from the house of Ulysses. Every one was astonished at seeing them, but they stood in the middle of the assembly, and Medon said, "Hear me, men of Ithaca. Ulysses did not do these things against the will of heaven. I myself saw an immortal god take the form of Mentor and stand beside him. This god appeared, now in front of him encouraging him, and now going furiously about the court and attacking the suitors whereon they fell thick on one another."

Raden Sangga memberi Isyarat pada Sanco.Tak Lama berselang Tiga orang pemuda gagah,hanya bercawat. Datang membawa peti kayu berisi emas batangan dan perhiasan dari batu mulia.

••She smacked him,