Destruction Of Heavens - Reviews

A very interesting read

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Impressive world-building an idea that is all based on. I enjoyed reading very much and it leaves me wanting more and to know what happens when the MC's true power is revealed to the world. It also leads to ideas and assumptions where did the dungeons come from? What is the monster's motives? How could this all end. All questions the author has plenty of room to develop and eventually answer through masterful storytelling and writing. Great job author don't quit, you have something unique and extraordinary in your hands.

it starts off decently but pretty soon you're introduced to the mc's annoying, childish, and sometimes hypocritical personality. he's also very stupid. a lot of his decisions are stupid, and he's very emotional - not in a good way. emotions are fine, but they're annoying when the only thing they do to a character is limit them and make it frustrating to read. he's also kind of hypocritical. early on when he goes into the world where time has stopped outside and everyone has to get insignias or whatever, he decides to destroy the world (the fake world, not earth) because a lot of people will die otherwise. but it's just stupid and hypocritical because everyone in that world decided to be there knowing the risks and knowing they may die. why does he have any right to destroy the world and "save" all these people from the risks? the mc is really annoying, so i had to drop it

"Stupid animal!

Chapter 12: Vacation

Where was I? Oh right, recruiting this guy.

They kept talking about they are going to do today, and what they have done yesterday, one topic lead to another, just like yesterday's dinner.

"Tomas, keadaan gadis ini kritis, kalau dibiarkan di sini nyawanya bisa tidak tertolong.." ujar letnan itu.

My hobbies and sports are playing Football Not American Football, Archery, rocking climbing, Zip wiring, taking to my friends and family, Football, making people laugh, writing novels, Watching WWE on YouTube, listen to music, eating health Foods and going to college/church.

            Floating around space without a spacesuit is so deadly, even if you are a magician. The radiation that the sun emits is harmful, and if you try to breathe in space, your lungs will collapse because there is no air and air pressure. Yet, the man does not breathe at all, and he is ignoring the radiation.