Demon Spawn - Reviews

Yeah it seems good so far I recommend Filler song again……Gunter, why did you gunt my fries?I gunted them, and they were mine.What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?Gunter, there were tears there.If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?

Godfather,mayor,investigator,medium,witch,escort,Medusa from town of Salem all wrapped into one character.                                                                       

a great read. writing could be a little be improved cause I was getting confused that some dialogue weren't mark. And Im always kinda lost whenever the characters especially the chosen ones are introduced. all in all I enjoy reading it. the story really gives you the "what happens next I want to know what happens next?" vibes

It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.

A man was walking Naked in jungleWhen animals Saw him, they all run away"The Zebra then asked the LionEven you King of the Jungle?"The Lion replied: Oh my friend keep the jokes aside, that is a Strange Animal. It's tail was infront of it.

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I'm fine with the character and story in fact I'm loving it but it's only 1 chapter per week and it's a very slow roll and since I'm guessing you want this story to be relatively long for what it's worth the current pace is going to bore the people who want to keep reading in  response causing them to drop the book please make a new chapter at least 3 times a week because at this pace it's going to die out

Xia Qingyue she would have her eyes with surprise and her face went pale because she had realized that she had begun to see Uchiha Madara more than as an acquaintance but as someone to admire, at some point, she had begun to want to know more about him.

Momo blushed a bit and hurried said, "The-then you can just call me Momo." she paused. Then she looks down and continues, "My quirk is called 'Creation'  which gives me the ability to create any non-living material from my skin through the molecular manipulation of my fat cells. As long as I understand how things are made of, I can make it." she explained still blushing.

"Luckily I escaped in time or I would have become a handicapped person by the angry demon king . " said Bekora releasing a breath of relief . Even though it was scary , Helios's temperament could be totally understandable . He was cheated again by another girl who tried to help his aunt in damaging his company . It was the third time already. He didn't care about the women who surrendered him  but he just felt as if nobody could be trusted anymore . Helios's character was just like a king's . He was born with a silver spoon on his hand and with a high level of IQ . As a result he became independent at the age of 18 and also he was deemed as the most wanted guy . He had good looks , he had power , the women beg to recive just a glance from him but Helios always keeps his calm and cold attitude.  The incident that happened four years ago made him built a giant , thick , invisible wall in order to keep the things under his control . Even the fact of being a player was just a cover he himself made in order to escape blind dates sent by his aunt .

"I sure will win president" I give him a smile and he walks away. I sighed a looked at the board. I noticed someone walking past me it's that new boy Whose name I still don't know. I ran towards him.

"Let's do this, young master. Your enemy is me!"