Demon Slayer: La Fruta de Hielo Estalla - Reviews

One of the best short stories.... storyline will keep you guessing with lust love revenge hate constantly keeping me guessing with twist and turns from start to finish.......LOVE

Waiting for more twists !!

Terrible Ending ruined everything ??Before the forced/abrupt ending it was actually decent. There were a few problems that made it a little rough around the edges but nothing that couldn't be solved in later chapters.

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The story is progressing fine. Writing quality is good. I would suggest less of gore. But then if that is your story style, you shouldn't stray. Overall nice story. Good luck.

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I'm reviewing my novel because I think it has a lot of potential

"Alright, I guess this is as far as you can go. I already had my fun."

"Oh gosh,this guy is really the king of fools,look at the way he is advertising his stupidity in public ".i thought in my mind staring at him with a disgusting look.

Me:"OK your skirt is like totally torn up".

"Her father didn't want her to be with an unworthy partner, he is very traditional, and he wouldn't want his family to be brought down in prestige, yeah, I am actually really sorry, that's why I tried to beat you in the tournament, she told me that if you win you would graduate."

"What happened,  pal" Damien asked him showing some support to him.