Deletes - Reviews

MC has god complex, thinking and acting as if he's the most superior and all of humanity is like his pet slaves

Mtl story, can't understand anything...

This looks like another incredible work, I know how much hardwork you put in this.I will be enjoying this novel for the time being...Anyways, goodluck author! I'll support you!

Bro there is already a manhua about it and it is more advanced ..................................  .........FFFFFFFFfFFfFFFFfFFfFFFFFF

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I honestly have a heart for this kind of stories. The first chapter was already intense, the second hits the emotion, and the story's progress is amazing. A story full of action, yes! Character depth, yes! There's a few punctuation errors, but overall, it has the potential! :)

Hmm, I read the raws, the story is so good at the beginning, but as the story progress through about 100+ chaps, I feel like the story and the focus of the novel swayed a bit or so...... Also it looks like the MC become a little or quite weak compared to the strenght he shows in the starter parts of the story. But overall, I dropped it midway, but hey the start is quite good, unfortunately it seems it is losing its potential bit by bit.

I really like this story, this is great. there maybe some error, but that's normal, just make sure to reread and fix it in the future. Overall, I like it and will continue read it

Garet obeyed the man's orders.  Lie turned his head towards that man, Yuristo.

(Lexa)

  The next day many in the village were practicing were showing their children how to use their spirits. And in one pacific yard we find Issac and Emy practicing.