Deicide: God Killer - Reviews

So far this is ''i never run out of mana'' but with worse world.You get stronger by not killing and leveling up (there is a game system but no level) but instead by absorbing animal cores you get from dungeon's which is stupid af since all you need to be is rich and theoretically you can be the strongest human ever (buy skills and cores and bam hello strongest guy yo). (animal cores are currency btw, that's how hunters make money)What a fucking nonsense.

This novel is one of the best rebirth or reincarnation so far. Some rebirth or reincarnation novels are pretty bad that the mc in it does not seem an old monster since their rebirth did not manage them to get an advantage to the rest, but the mc in this novel has it. What's even interesting is we won't need to worry about the mc since he is an unscrupulous person, accompanied by comedic situations. What we need right now is a mass release!! Give this novel a try surely you'll like this!!

it's kind of interesting more chapters please

Let me be honest here.+ MC can solve anything ✅+ MC ruthless-  No one question MC can solve mystery -  Crown Princes DUMB level 9999Story development is good but character very bad. I dont know wht to say anymore. K bye

If you were thinking of reading this, don't.  I can't think of anyone that this would be a good read for.  But then maybe that is me and if you do enjoy it, I'm glad you have find a good book for you!

A lot of errors in this novel, not sure if it’s an issue with the translator or the original author but regardless there are a ton of inconsistencies when it comes to the character attributes obtained or the combat power level. Plenty of other errors as well. Sure you ca. figure out what’s going on but it makes it much less enjoyable to read.

This book is a good attempt at writing but there are plenty of mistakes that make it hard to understand what is being said. For instance, the pov changes are quite wonky and confusing, characters genders are mixed up, tons of tenses that are misused, and sentence structures that makes no sense. It's an admirable attempt at writing by not a non native English speaker. I know I wouldn't be able to write a coherent story either. Best of luck and keep improving! I'll check back in the future and update as needed.

Writing Quality: 5☆I don't count bad english or typos in these kind of reviews as they don't change the story, can always be edited and judging the authors english over small things like that is just unreasonable.Story Development: 5☆Even before any real big story development is made you can sometimes tell that it is good, and this is the case here too.If in these 12 chapters there would have been a big change, it would have already been bad in stories like this, so it is already good that, while you can already look in the future a little in the first chapter, there is no big change yet.The 'introduction chapter' tells you that in the next chapter from now there will definitely be some development in the next chapter.In other words, the pace of the story is well done.Character Design: 5☆Not much to say.In chapter 3 or 4 (I don't quite remember) we will be introduced to Ayane and we can already tell that she has a very special character and a very elaborate character design.Following that we get a glimpse of the reason for mc's attitude, which already hint on great character design for him.Later on in chapter 11 if I remember correctly, we get introduced to a student called Dracula as her surname. We also get a little explaination about the name and have a moment with her.While it was only speculation, I have made a comment at the end of the chapter that I have put my thoughts about her character in, and the fact that I was able to think of so many things already shows that she most likely also has a pretty special character on top of the bit that we already know.Somewhere we get a flashback to the prophecy and can see that even almost irrelevant background characters, such as the sage, don't lack personality, which is something I have only seen in 1 other novel for a just one character to be frank. If rating this 6☆ would be an option, I would choose it. Respect +1, sir author!Updating Stability: 4☆My sense of time us very bad, but (correct me if I'm wrong) I am pretty sure that, even tho we got daily chapter (I think at least...), the time in which they get uploaded isn't uniform.World Backround: 5☆Thank the god of fate, WE FINALLY GOT SOMETHING NEW AND AT LEAST A LITTLE ORIGINAL!!!

Guys, you need to relax and cut the author more slack on his first good novel.  I love the concept of this world, and the world background building is utterly astounding. I also love the characters and actual story arcs with them. It doesn't make sense you guys don't care about the characters since there is honestly no guarantee darkness will spare them. Now for the criticism, this story gets 3.8 stars. I feel like the stability of updates should be a little better, maybe like a stable chapter every 2 days. Also, the novel's pacing is a little too fast and in the beginning, Thomas feels more like the main character than darkness. The romance between Darkness and Darkness simply doesn't make sense and feels extremely forced. There was no development to explain how she's there, It's also explained multiple times it's not in Darkness' nature to feel the romance. Yet, for some reason with absolutely no development, Mc meets the 'previous Darkness' and she loves him to bits as soon as she comes in. Also, the grammar is good but the punctuations and commas need to be more focused. Also, the wording in the sentences could use a bit more work in my opinion.

It's the best book I've read so far. Wish they could make an anime or series about this. :) ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

karena ini masih belum masuk kelas jam pelajaran kedua, ryu pergi ke training room, alias ruangan latihan. seperti colosoeum tetapi lebih modern. sangat sepi di training room karena bukan pelajaranya hari ini tetapi, ryu bisa melihat seseorang sedang memukuli training dummy(boneka samsak) menggunakan longsword(pedang panjang) di tengah arena. dia memakai training suit(AN:Training suit seperti pakaian selam yang rapat dan elastis, bahkan kita bisa melihat ahoy uhum, maksud saya lekukan tubuh seseorang apalagi cewe cmiiw) dia mempunyi figur yang cantik dan elegan bahkan saat dia mengusap keringat di wajah nya, dia seperti bangsawan kerajaan. ryu melihat ke arah dia.

As they draw closer I can hear what they are talking about, they seem to be heading back to the city just where I want to go, so I guess I found my source of entertainment for the journey, as long as I don't walk faster than them.