Deep in his heart - Reviews

Amazing story! please more chapter author san☺☺

This novel should actually be a fan fiction. If you look at the novel Start Evolutionary Upgrade From Wild Monster, you might think it's almost flawless by comparison. But if you've read that novel, this adaptation is worth reading. Compared to the original, this version was more balanced. But I don't know maybe that's what's original.

the start screams beginner writerso you should fix thatand also I recommend talking about a topic for longer than:1chpt back in time2chpt meeting......3chpt attending.....4chpt reaching .......5chpt meeting betrayer6chpt revenge7chpt going back

It’s been a long time since I found a story that I’ve enjoyed as much as this one hardly recommend it.

The red line's back on my map.  "Get back in the hall, and I'll turn the lights back on." says Lodestone.

"No, ma. Please, Ayden tak nak kahwin dengan orang yang Ayden tak suka. Ayden baru je kehilangan Hazel, and now, you ask me to marry Melissa? What a nonsense. Ni mesti nenda yang paksa, kan?" tiada niat di hati mahu menengking mama sendiri. Tapi, di saat hati dia bercelaru untuk menerima kenyataan bahawa Hazel sudah tiada lagi, dia pula menerima berita sebegini?

"M24, M24, where's my M24?" Elon began muttering to himself even before they landed, as he looked around trying to locate where his favorite bolt-action sniper rifle is. It can be seen as an upgrade to the Kar98k which many people are familiar with, with higher muzzle velocity and damage. In a recent patch, this gun began spawning in the world rather than only in supply drops, and it deals the highest damage per round in the game amongst all weapons that spawn in the world, excluding the sniper rifle that only spawns in supply drops.

"That's not the words I want to hear..."

"Sigurado ka ba?"

I was so excited, until I saw the place they drove an hour to get, it's a restaurant!

Oh now this is rich, ha ha ha ha ha! This guy thinks that he is some legendary existence that I should bow down before, when in actuality that would in fact be me! I'm the Legendary Savior that humans have been waiting for for an endless age! I'm the one who people will cry with tears of joy when they see me, and know who I am! Hah... The retorts just don't stop on my side, and it's my dang fault that we are in this situation; after all I tripped the freaking cliche flag yesterday! (A/N: You sure did, you dumb ass. XD)

aku terkejut ternyata naga ini adalah naga yang ada di cerita sihir pemanggilan, salah satu naga mitos yang sangat hebat, perlu 20 penyihir kelas A untuk memanggil nya dan di korbankan, setelah mengetahui status monster itu aku melakukan pencarian terhadap ibuku, aku tidak bisa menemukan dia karena kota sudah porak poranda oleh serangan Leviathan,