Deaths Door Online - Reviews

I picked up this novel for one reason and that was Kingdom building tag. I have read over 100+ chapters and I am yet to see any type of Kingdom building initiative done by the MC. I understand that it takes time but this novel seems like more of an action adventure revenge novel where MC does levelling up and cultivation inside a to get stronger to get revenge. the overall writing is not bad but I feel that every 5 chapters there is some new skill while we don't even get to understand more about existing skills. World building can be bit confusing at times due to lack of clarity. I am thinking of dropping this novel as it doesn't seem like there will be any Kingdom building done in next 500-600 chapters as the MC has yet to even start making a guild. His past trauma is making him hesitant to form new friendships and he seems adamant to do everything on his own. Of course that might change in future with character development but as of now this novel isn't about Kingdom building but more of a journey of a guy who is seeking vengeance and revenge while doing self harm in the process just to achieve the end result. Please remove the Kingdom building tag so others like me who wanted to read a decent Kingdom Building novel don't get mislead.

Those of you, who want to enter h*ntai world for snu snu...... ??...Review : From synopsis, he's already OPI mean does he even need to live on earth, he can go to any anime world & get rich + immortality + girls..... It would be more interesting if he would be like Jarvis ( with no human body ) & we could see some challenges....now* let's hope it's not all wish fulfilment thingy.... So, let's see where it goes.... ????

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1 word... Trippyi rarely give a full 5 start review but this one deserves it. it's start with a bit mainstream then flipped your entire mind. How can you combined froopyland and hell in one world? it's crazy. it was like I'm using lsd and crack. i like the character and all but what get me hooked was the world. It was unreal and what is the word... ...colorful? i know, i know. they have a literal hellspawn but the world was amazing. Great  experience if you want to feel something fresh.

Daryle's  eyes met her husband's gentle eyes focused on her face. She blushed upon seeing his handsome face. She bit her lower lip as she burried her face in his naked chest. Oh wait! They're both naked by the way! Oucchhh!

" that something a man should be doing, it's okay. but who is she?"

I rubbed my ear, turning to Jabari who's gazed was locked on his wife's swaying hips. I let out a chuckle, which snapped him out his lustful gaze. I smirked at him when he looked at me, he playfully shoved me saying 'shut up, you'll find yourself a women that will have you falling over in the mud for her.' I smile at that, hoping I'll find someone that will have that effect on me soon.

*Goosebumps*

This is a really captivating volume, and with more work it could really stand out. I feel the pacing should be adjusted, some scenes feel rushed, and also adjust the clarity for more flow.

nice work keep going I'll just reviewing it