Death succumbs to those who do not seek thee. - Reviews

okay maybe am i wrong to say that you might be going off-track because do the women really have to be shown off to the world  you could consider this but you really a great writer indeed

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Another novel with the same old plot, get every1 inside a VRMMO, make the protagonist be a nobody then send him back in time, still waiting for a novel where the protagonist will be someone great without having knowledge of the future...Anyway with no romance/cute interactions and no life outside the gaming world, this feels like a cultivation novel where the MC cultivates for 1000 years and we read 10k chapters of the same thing happening over and over again, plot isn't very interesting either so...

Well The Writing Quality Is Good, There Is Room For Story Development.Author can Try To liven Up Characters By Emphasizing More On Emotional Aspect as well as their featured.The Most Promising Thing, Is World Background. Which Author Can Further Improvised To Inter-Galatic Wars or more As Author may see fit, As There will be different species in future author can I have our MC s*x With Inter-species.Well Author May Need To First As Public Opinion As There May Not Be Many People Who are Interested In Such Kinky Stuff...Well Last But Not Least It Has Room For Growth But The Book Has Not Been Updated For Probably 5 Months So I Gave 1 Star If Possible I won't give a starI ain't Stingy, But Yeah If You Dropped This Please Mentioned It So Others May Not Get Their Hopes Irked Upon This Story .I Will Change This Review After Author Has Upoladed Enough Chapters For Further Assessment Thank You ❤️

Good novel so far, I've currently read up to 33 chapters and although not top tier, it has the the potential to be. Once it shows more of its potential I'll upgrade this rating to five.

Extremelt inconsistent. Felt like two different novels. So yeah. People are thirsty so they’ll prob give this 5 stars for the dual cultivation

Good story but I would like more consistent updates if that is possible. Thank you for writing this story author. I hope you continue to write.

.....................................................................................I just want more people to see, original work on Qidian

Glad to have the pleasure to read this story for free. It is very good, annoying in some cases. But overall its solid with great action, drama and character growth for Jionni. Though I am more curious about who his other loves will be. I can say my favorite part of this fic was his interaction with the spider leader and her misunderstanding of the situation. An Jionni had to correct that with the swiftness. Please continue writing, its a solid story and I love the interactions. Which are the highlights of this story.

from now this is the real hidden truth of the invisible dragon the past of the invisible dragon

It is enough for Lu Yan. He doesn't need to do anything, being with her is enough. No words or action needed. There is something he cannot explain, everything just felt right when he is with her. He feels satisfy and complete being there.

Hearing his mother's words.linfeng understood everything.but he didn't say anything but nodded his head and went back to his room.