Death Lives - Reviews

Wow!! This book was HOT!!

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Very good novel, especially for the protagonist in search of a harem that I sincerely appreciate a lot, in addition to the possible big harem.  Some may complain about the r-18 short scenes, but haven't you read the novel "dual cultivation"?  That novel has few r-18 scenes and they're all just as short, but I don't see anyone complaining about that.  Anyway, author, please don't drop this novel, it has a lot of potential.  For my part I can only say that I loved it and I hope you continue like this.

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

This is a great book. I think everything in this story is very different. I don't think I've read a story where the system has a actual physical form, as well as one about an artist. The writing flows really well and the author is great at responding.

By chapter 12, MC saves a young master. The young master was wearing a disguise, turns out he is a she. She wakes up, punches MC in face since she is naked on top.... MC explains he saved her life. She thanks him. They end up flirting, hugging, kissing and she says "Be gentle" while MC gives her the meat?. Garbage writing like this is what bothers me. Way too forced.  Romance was insanely rushed.... MC even has a damn soul bond with a half demon-half celestial wolf puppy by saving the mom Wolf who has  a total of 15million HP.  More crappy & forced than the most garbage cultivation novel. I had to drop it. Do not bother at all.

DUDE if one person want die his problem not ***  i hate stupid mc  and your mc realy bad :S anyway  i thing u must be dont  read  and i know my english soo bad

I'm up to chapter 30 right now. The novel is generic, as if any other person were to reincarnate as a novel-type scenario. But the writing quality is irritating, and I don't mean the grammar; rather, the manner the author writes the story is irksome; I can't count how many times the protagonist breaches the fourth wall, which makes me cringe at times, and there are simply too many info dumps.

He was still talking when the lady walked through him.

It's nothing.

I trace butterfly kisses down his chest and abs. He placed his hands on my hips squeezing them slightly. Then he came on top of me and move towards south. He licked all my cream and whispered mhmmmm. I will make love for whole night he mumbled and I nodded. Then with a slow thrust he entered me and started moving gently. His eyes were changing color with each thrust as if the maroon sky with liquid golden eyes were saying that I'm his forever. Then we made love all night continuously as two body and one soul. The night was special night he worshipped me all savoring every second with love. And I moaned his name again and again. We savored the moment with burning passion of love.