Deal or real? - Reviews

started reading when there were only 30 chapters out... excited to see what happens next. I hope you keep this going!

Two things I hate mixed together, cultivation in a modern world setting and staying lowkey. Those two are trash separately, who on their right mind thought it was a good idea to put both on one novel

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Im genuinely convinced everyone who reviews and comments on these stories are bots. The world development is bad. The author throws at ranks, names and areas without telling us anything about what they mean and if he does the meanings he gives are things you could tell from a educated guess. " its big" "because they're evil and not righteous".  I havent gotten far enough to see much character design vecause i stopped at chapter three. But even then it was so bad, it wasnt like they were people or characters, more like the authors inner concersation with himself, and i didnt even mention yet it seems like when the characters do speak its just them talking about how great their sect is. How great their cultivation is, etc. And thats not even the worst part. The grammar is horrendous. The first chapter wasnt bad but was annoying to read. The second chapter was worse but you could still read it. The third chapter however? Just in the first quarter i pointed out around 10+ errors. I gave up at that point bc i would never finish the chapter of i kept going. So im just going to end it here. I wrote this so someone else hopefully doesnt get tricked by the false reviews that say the story is amazing with nothing wrong with it. Knowing webnovel my review might be pushed down so no one sees it or even removed. But to those who do see and read it. If you can stand a horribly written story that seems to be a translation(not sure about it yet) then go for it. If your not, and your like me. You could check it out but i wouldnt reccomend it, unless by the time you read this the author gets a proof reader and someone to fix all the errors that plague the chapters.

Im not sure what to say about this novel honestly, i feel this poor translaters talent is wasted on this novelhonestly i quite liked the first 50ish chapters where it was more of a slap stick comedy with a retardedly op mc, with plot armor so thicc that he could honestly survive a direct nuclear blastHowever, after reading a bit further, that is really not the case, the mc feels so incredibly weak, levels, stats and gear have no meaning this chapter i dropped it, he has a pet with a base 750 ms, which is so fast that the pet can catch arrows mid air. this stupid mother****er gets some **** stolen from him (game mechanics lol) and he doesnt use the fastest boi alive, excuse me what the ****it was an alright time sink comedy, but jesus christ he ruined that too

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So many grammatical errors and mismatching of the names. Definitely machine translated and poorly edited. How does this have 4.7 stars? Unbelievable.

HELL YEAH! its finally being translated. I have been keeping up with the comics but finally!!! We are so behind but it finally translated! Also mc is super op but has very cool interesting powers.

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Okay I would not be surprised if this novel wins WSA. No, I mean like for real. It has all the ingredients to win it AND the writing is publication quality. 5star does not do it justice. 1. Writing quality: PAR EXCELLENCE. NO typos, grammatical errors. Vocabulary congruent to the story and setting. And words are lucid and not unnecessarily convoluted. Flows easily.2. Stability of Updates: stable lol3. Story development: superb pacing. Doesn't dawdle, gets into the thick of things right away without compromising the pacing. Very very interesting twist on the transmigration/system genre and you do not have to be a fan of the genre to like it, you will like it either way. There are the elements of an epic story that you will know about pretty early. Also, political conflict is there, which makes it even better for me. lol. 4. Character Design: Superb simply. The MC only really interacts with the system but you can already tell he will be a fun MC to follow. Fun and brave, the elements of a perfect hero. And the heroine is compelling too. :D5. World Background: Superb. Beautifully explained by the system without making it sound weary and expositional. REALLY GREAT WORK. Will definitely stay in my library. I cannot wait for Alex and Archmage to speak with each for the first time.