Dancer In The Shadow - Reviews

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The setting seems interesting and it has potential but needs serious editing. There are lots of grammar mistakes and unnecessarily long sentences here and there.

Will Jeremy be alone forever, without company? I know he will have no companions, but at least servants?Brasil??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??

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This is a review of chapter 1 since that is all that is currently out. I didn't know what to expect going into this. But in the end, I came out satisfied. From an enjoyment point of view, I think this story has a lot of potential right off the bat. I am curious to see how the two will grow their relationship. And I NEED to know more about what lies in the astral state. Those entities are set up to be great threats so you better bring out their full horror!From a grammatical point of view. I think it's nearly perfect as is. The only thing I could be picky about is some small grammar points like punctuation and spelling. Some words could've also been used better but it still is fully comprehensible. I think proofreading once or twice will make this the best up-and-coming story!

the start screams beginner writerso you should fix thatand also I recommend talking about a topic for longer than:1chpt back in time2chpt meeting......3chpt attending.....4chpt reaching .......5chpt meeting betrayer6chpt revenge7chpt going back

Very underrated. I hope this doesn't get dropped because it looks like the author actually put a lot of effort into worldbuilding unlike most of these TNE-esque stories.

I’m Definitely giving this book a Five Star,I was reading the chapter one but had to quickly come to rate it….I love this book so much,well…lemme continue reading hehe ??

Tang Feng really standout than the kids of his age because with his sky blue hair, a eyes like a blue sapphire , red lips , cute nose, plus the calm and serene aura that surround him, Tang Feng looks are not inclined towards beautiful but he looks like a scholars who full of knowledge and wisdom

His voice grew unsteady, "Yeah, of course." He took it from me as his mom gave me a knowing grin and a subtle nod, making me blush. His hands softly left trails as he put my necklace on. "There," He said. "It's on."

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