DIMENSIONAL WORLD - Reviews

For all of these five star reviews on this book, i guess i will have to be the equalizer; i read up to chapter 46 today, and let me tell you; my day was wasted on trash, don't read this book, don't waste your time, there are so many better books on qidian, i don't even understand how this is trending, but i will list a few issues so you can have a general idea of what you're getting into with this.1. Science and magic is portrayed as complete opposites able to completely replace the other, this boils down to the world he lives in not even having math or physics, just magic.2. There was mention of a cultivation technique with the old mans necklace ring, which would allow him to save the world, he promptly forgets about it and doesent remember within the next 40 chapters, idk if he ever remembers. Keep in mind that those 40 chapters span a time period of about 2 years. Yup.3. The author mentions the characters ages etc. But forgets to mention their mental age, which is important because all of them seem about 5-10 years younger mentally than they should be; especially the 16 year olds.4. The mc tries to lay low by being dismally bad at studying and almost getting expelled if he wasnt actually a crouching tiger hidden dragon, which he is, but hes dismal at that too; as under the examination he is measured to be better than everyone else... how to be low key: 1. Become the trash on the bottom of society, 2. Become the divine leader of the leaderboard within seconds, 3. Do it all in the presence of the whole school to be sure they notice and gossip about it, 4. Piss of the strongest existence in the whole city, because u have beef with him but u still wanna lay low... wait?The magic system is pretty pathetic aswell, though i didn't really see its potential during the 40 chapters, add onto a bunch of inconsistencies, some sexist remarks and an 'in general' scaredycat useless horndog mc what do we got?(btw the whole draw was the idea of a badass mage owning people within his own ranks, but i lost faith pretty quickly as he is basically op by virtue of deus ex machina ,or even worse; op by old man he paid respect to being hidden expert with tons of priceless treasures to help him along. There is no reason to root for him, atleast not as far as i saw, and he definitively isn't even slightly badass.)Apparently a trending story on qidian... what a joke.Lets see qidian delete this review, i'm curious if they actually do.Oh btw i rate it 1 out of 5 stars because i don't think the release rate matters when it comes to quality, in fact it might be in detriment to it. As for the writing quality, i don't only consider grammar, but overall enjoyment of the plot and characters and motivations. Cause the stuff connecting that stuff isnt air, u have to use writing to connect ****, unless you are making an encyclopedia, where its enough to put the information in alphabetical order.

yes. just yes. this is exactly what i needed. a webnovel about a dude with a system that turns him into a fish. i can die happy now!lin fan have my babies

Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.

this novel is so dumb who wrote it?MC is brain dead MC gets in constant conflicts for no reason surely the author doesn't know how to write a novel

A really good read aside form the plot to make MC alone, the rest is ok...

An Anime based novel is to kill for, got me engross from the start wow ? especially with the part of the chemical plant exploding ? poor hiro I hope his parents survives this ?

Everything is great but the mc is a total simp and thinks with his dick.other than that it’s a great story ??????????????????

....Ima be just honest all of your books ( the three you have rn ) are just great and i hope you keep going until the end. Wish you the best, i love your books and will keep reading and i hope you keep updating.With much love - a reader

The worst part is he cannot even close his eyes. The shadow claw come faster at him before it was dissolved by a blue aura that comes from nowhere.

"Well, yes. As it's the only language I speak it's helpful you said it in the human language. How are you able to speak human, fluent even?"

  Malam sudah semakin larut. Namun Sehun tidak juga tertidur. Ia terus gelisah memikirkan keadaan Yoona. Ia lantas bangkit dari kasur lalu berjalan keluar. Dilihatnya keadaan diluar yang senyap. Yang terlihat hanya beberapa bodyguard yang tengah berjaga-jaga. Ia memanfaatkan ketenangan itu, duduk di taman terasa lebih nyaman.

Everyone here was equal in the planning, nobody taking the lead too much.  Adrian wrote down all that was said and discussed, figuring out how everything was going to tie together.  Even the System gave some tips and gave him credit for it.  They even threw out ideas for other games such as strategy ones.