This Novel has great Potential, the grammar isn’t bad, some paragraphs don’t flow perfectly but overall the grammer is good.The story plot is pretty great, I simply hope that u don’t make this novel to slow paced, system novels aren’t great when the plot line goes to slow.I’ll add more to this review if the author keeps on post daily, good luckI ranked everything 5 stars because I dont know yet, I’ll come back later and readjust them.