DANGEROUSLY WANTED: The criminal next-door - Reviews

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this is good, mc is cursed and everything he do will be reversed... at first I was started getting annoyed by his teacher actions.. but then I found it amusing... story is fine.. what I like most is mc himself.. his actions are funny and dialogues are quite enjoyable to read... I did like to read further...

"What is your problem?! We just arrived last night and now you're already drunk as f*ck and breaking things!" Her sister, Patty, argued with her husband.

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Absolutely incredible novel, never gets boring and always something happening to put you on the edge and want to read more, I recommend this novel, one of the best ever put on this platform!!!

Fairly decent, enjoyable book. I have to disagree with some of the other reviews, though. It certainly isn't a masterpiece. That being said, It does have potential, especially if the author focuses more on edits and proofreading. His name is inconsistent. There is a full paragraph in one of the more middle chapters that is a directly copied ChatGPT response, which was a bit of a surprise. If the author steps up the editing and makes sure to keep the story itself smooth sailing like it is till chapter 25 so far, it has serious potential.

so far I really like the story! keep it up  ?                                                                                                               

Very good start with the Mayan themes, very cool, I love mythology and religious themes like this. I am starting to wonder if it is just the Mayans or other pantheons that exist on earth and if they will show up later down the line. I love the start so far and usually, I can tell if I am going to like a novel from the start. Stick to the good writing and don't do stupid stuff to ruin the book like rushing it or anything. Please don't drop bro.

They also gained the ability to gather Psionic energy. Studies showed that the Psionic abilities are only accessible to the ones with upgradable immortal genes. Slowly the guards became so strong that one guard could warrant over 100,000 inmates alone. It must be known that the entire facility has a population of 700 million people give or take. That being said, there are currently 7,000 warrants.

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"Lia, let's go," said the unknown man.