Cuidador de um Vampiro - Reviews

Im gonna level, the intro on this story... isnt great. The pace is great (rare for a WN, so good job) and the characters have a nice foundation; but I cant believe it, for an disaster novel it lacks authenticity. There are so many cases where common sense flies out the window and the established world rules are disregarded (any scene involving the elevator is just a big box of stupid). Its like Im reading a first draft of an inexprinced author; this being a WN I’m probably not wrong. A second draft or editor would improve things drastically on this front, but its not unreadable by even by WN standards. Just dont think to hard about the technical side of the world building.Beyond that Theres... GoodThe premise is interesting, the tension is present, and it has great growth potential for both the story and author.  BadA bit heavyhanded with the early messages, could have been done in a more natural way, lots of telling but little showing (chapter 4/5 is mostly just infodumps), The characters all start off as stupid. The MC in particular leaps past dense and dashes for the label of braindead. Thats ignoring his moral compass and naivr begining.Its far from a masterpiece on an execution basis; but the author has enough ideas to make it an interesting, if occasionaly infurating, ride.

What is Huxia?Author or translator, if You write a story in English, Spanish, Portuguese and French; kindly use English, Spanish, Portuguese and/or French names. Using Chinese names is unpleasant, confusing, difficult to read and remember; for example: Lian Shung Tiaxang went to ask for some apples, she told him that Leam Shang Taoxeng only has peaches.

Overall, the first five chapters of this novel demonstrate a promising start to the story with well-developed characters and an immersive world-building.Lei Zhen, the protagonist, is introduced as a level-headed and calm individual, with a distinct lack of lustful behavior towards the mature woman clad in green robes, showing his character's depth and credibility. This is further reinforced by his clear and logical thought process, as seen in his decision to accept the default setting for his character creation rather than risking a time-consuming process of creating a new character from scratch.The world-building of the game, Magnolia, is also well-established, with the incorporation of the VRMMORPG aspect and the existence of different game classes for players to choose from. The concept of Unique Classes, obtainable through hidden missions and story quests, adds an additional layer of mystery and excitement for players.The system within the game is also well-explained, with the use of equipment providing bonus stats and the function of the scanner during character creation. However, the occurrence of the bug that transported Lei Zhen to the high-level Lux Forest raises questions about the reliability and stability of the game.One constructive criticism for the novel would be the lack of description and detail in the setting and environment of Lux Forest. While it is mentioned that the area is filled with greenery, more specific and immersive descriptions of the surroundings would further enhance the reader's experience and understanding of the character's location.Overall, the first five chapters of this novel have successfully drawn me in as a reader and piqued my interest in the story. I am excited to see how the plot progresses and how Lei Zhen's character will develop in the immersive world of Magnolia.

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Wow!, That's all I can say, Just wow...I am really speechless, author you are really blowing my mind, I totally love everything about your book ??

I'll give you a 5 star rating. It's like I'm watching a movie rather than reading it. of course, if you have great imagination ?. so interesting and you would be very curious as to whom and how. keep it up writer

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Highly recommended Very good one of the best ones first big respect for female mc without yuri it’s rare these days and also a very interesting world building and character development(although not much) The gender bender was not really needed because it was never mentioned again after the first chapter honestly would have been less weird if Alex was a girl from the beginning alright time for review:First I would like to mention what I dislike first Lack of character design was probably the biggest problem here almost no character except Alex got a detailed explanation even Alex wasn’t really detailed and would have been even better if there was photos of the design second thing is abandonments of stats in later chapters they become entirely forgotten only displaying levels as compat power which isn’t really right because high level cap should mean higher stats on equal levels and also weapons and skills should be mentioned in fights but the gap between high and low levels is just too huge (minor spoiler: 150 monoarch levels3-8 (tier 3) could only delay time against a single level 1 king(tier4)the gap is too huge for skills, strategy’s, weapons and mastery over power to matter) and i think thats it for complainingTime to start with the good things first the world building is very excellent(thanks to latest chapters) it’s one of the best things here i also like how the author keep putting alex in a tight spot so it be more interesting than everything going smoothly while of course it get solved but it’s more interesting to watch then just everythihg going smoothly also i like how other lords while not as strong as alex have op abilites (minor spoiler: |mind control of lilith that can simpy make an entire country her puppet rapheula infinite revivial troll lord op regeneration satan million demon transformations well he just transform to a new form every time he appear)| other things i like are fights while not amazing they are good and it seem they may improve in the future i also like the strategy part and Alex adaptability to new situations and figuring out what to do character development is good but not much just very minor changes the pacing is very well done minor grammar mistakes and I like the power system and how it evolves Overall: while there are minor problems it is an extremely good one with everything a good novel need (excpet character design) with little romance no harem no yuri

good novel author. you story has potential to grow. and it's hyping with just a few chapters that I've red and it has a wonderful storyline and background coming from the perspective of mine a free reader . I hope you don't drop your story I'll always be reading your updated chapters  praying for your good health mentally and physically ??✌️

"A council member approached me today," Xiang had started. "I'm allowed to begin field work now. He was congratulating me; said it was my duty and that I would be making my family proud."

"You let Prince Clovis know you were back in the country. I'm friends with one of the women in his employ. It wasn't a strictly confidential matter, so there was no problem in her telling me you were back." She explained nonchalantly. "How did it go? He wouldn't see you?" She guessed as she eyed the open bottle of liquor on his desk disdainfully.

"Shut up and get out and now, while you still have the chance"