Clockwork powers? Sure! Wait, why am i on a fantasy world? - Reviews

Clockwork powers? Sure! Wait, why am i on a fantasy world?
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all I can is.. if you don't like an MC that has a one track brain cell then don't bother. This is one is a full copy paste cliché with an MC thats got a serious fetish for standing and receiving a beating and the enemies all don't have brain cells. They only live to give away free material, and increase MCs strength. or rather he's defense so he can receive more beatings .
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boringgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
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The story is fast paced and the chapters rather short. Also, there are some grammatical errors but it doesn't make it difficult to understand. Give it a try if you like game-like stories.
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Normally, such silly little creatures would have been attacked and destroyed by the many strong predators that roam in the woods, however the powerful aura radiating from the trio had caused many to flee in fear.  Those that were bold ended up beaten and they only escaped because the three silly beasts laughed and rolled around in their victory instead of applying the final blow.  Also, they were unable to chase after their escaping prey because they have yet to figure out how to run properly with their almost nonexistent legs.
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Quickly getting bored, I begin talking to myself.
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Walking outside he realized that there men trapped in front of his shack, it was only now that he remembered that he had put them there. With a snap of his fingers they were released, it had been a few days by his guess and the once pristine looking armors that they wore were now filthy and dinged up.
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Boys where running still on the ground .
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Drat. Wish I hadn't been curious enough to read on when the previous chapter clearly said 'the end'
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       "The amusement park sounds good. Let's do that one!" after the twins said their ideas, Noah chose one and they all left.
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Paulina: Yes when I was created I had to delve  into your mind to get ideas for magic that you can purchase.
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"No Kate , Your tired , You've just arrived , I'll cook" Henry Insisted then Henry glared at Martin when he saw that he was holding his laughter

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