Clan of Desire; The lustful legacy - Reviews

Those triplets make me feel like p*nching them in the face. Daphne deserves to be happy.

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This fanfic is greater but it's no for me, yeah I like opmc and when I see the synopsis I was catch by it but the 4th chapter began to downfall for me, because. the "mc" gave both of his parent the future of him and making them know who he was. and it was huge turn off for me because why would he do that? because it's his parents? well he could just make both of them safe right? so why would he do that? there will be no time paradox because he controlled time itself, so he can secure that his other of him will not have a system, because he is "one" or Omnipresent you might say.the 3rd chapter was good because he become omnipotent being, he became the strongest being in the story so it will become good but.... it ruined for me I don't know if you guys like it.{[This is just my Opinion]}

I would like to ask if this has been dropped before I start reading

Super funny, great world building, tons of detail and really distinctive and unique characters. Our MC is hilarious but his actions are very relatable and is a breath of fresh air compared to typical arrogant young master MCs or hiding his true power type or ruthless killer types. MC as the novel title says, is obsessed with trying to preserve his life in the dangerous cultivation world, and realistically his concerns are very relatable. However fate would force him to various dangerous life threatening situations that sets him off on his path of cultivation and power.Highly recommended. Its completely unlike the other cultivation novels out there. Great world building, hilarious and gripping story.

This is one of those novels where you will either loved it, or you will really hate it. The MC has a system that requires him to have a useless sect but his disciples goes OP instead. This gains his sect fame, which cause the MC to lose his cultivation. In many ways, the MC is like Boss Pei in "Losing Money To Be A Tycoon

Seems readable now. I remember it was quite different when I came across this last week. A good change at least. The story's interesting. Gone are obnoxious young lads! Looking forward for future chapters.

I like the way you write it, easy to understand and simple. After the first chapter, i realised I turn the page already. Who was that person on the MC's dream? anyway, Keep writing :))

my old review was deleted (I think I gave like 2.7 stars) this time I will not take an hour of my time to write an in-depth review. Why should I? This story is bad and it is getting worse over time, earlier chapters (until 100) are pretty good and promising. But at some point the author has stopped trying to write a good story and focused on writing as much as possible. The focus shifted to earning money which is TOTALLY FINE. But he sadly disregarded proofreading and story telling which is NOT FINE.

"Please follow me, my Aurors should already be surrounding each of the Death Eaters locations, awaiting our arrival." said Amelia as she led Brynhildr and the Valkyries away from the castle.

Akhirnya keluarga Said melamar Tuti, Tuti sempat kaget karna Said tak memberi tau terlebih dahulu, tapi itulah Said, selalu penuh dengan kejutan.

Hmmm op af