City dungeon - Reviews

zZCandyZz rated this 5 stars 18 times, so don't get mad when I rate this 1 star 3 times. Anyways, this is just a novel of a beta cuck MC, so if you're into that then this is the novel for you.

The first chapter is so captivating. The detailed description of the action engulfs your mind, like you a part of the happenings. Perfectly written.

I absolutely love this book 11/10! There's just something about the crafting and world building that makes it feel so magical and real. I can't put this book down I binged it in a day (7ish chapters as of this review) and I can't wait to read more. I've never read a book from the perspective of an old man and I have to say I prefer it to the rest now. If you're looking for a fun and magical read I'd highly recommend this!

Really slow. Puts to much detail into things that don’t even matter. English is a bit off, not bad though.

i gave 5 stars just because the story was unique. Thats all. Really getting desperate to read non cliche ones and this week had 3 good ones imo

Its like another story of upgrade specialist in another world with a worst plot and writing style. it looks it got its idea in that novel so this novel is no no for me.

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

==Cuidado, aquellos que hablan español y traducen los capitulos por traductor de ingles a epañol, porque no se puede traducir la pagina por el sistema antipiratería(solo se puede traducir capítulos gratis), asi que si compras capitulos, y intentas traducirlos no va a funciónar.

I’m not sure where to start, really. The author’s style of writing is unique and it enhances the storytelling significantly as you are easily able to read into the emotions of the character. The plot itself is unsettling, but in a good way. Scenes are vivid in description and they weave into each other well. Only minor downside is that the chapters are a little short, but that is to be expected from a novel of this quality.

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Bhumi's heart was beating fast and she couldn't filter her thoughts before they left her tongue, "But, you didn't even look at me twice, didn't even praise me then, and I thought you were disgusted at how you must have thought I was throwing myself at you."

Sabrina looked at him like he was some crazy person. "What are you talking about?" she asked.