Citadel of Elon - Reviews

Well, I would have loved to give the novel at least 4* stars. BUT: The authors just tells the story, without any explanations and hints. Everything is just a fact. No real stats or skill descriptions. The world feels boring and you just get pushed from one scene to the next without reason. Much is repeated all the time. And everything without any explanations.

very nice novel, i hope the author come back for more chapters.zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Love the story keep dem chapters coming ...............................................................................................................................

I wish to slam my head into a wall after reading this amazingly perfect piece of trash, it has more holes than a sponge and more idiocy and hypocrisy as well as entitlement than anything else ive seen in all my nine lives

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Great book, hope the author picks it up again and continues it, also is there a discord or patreon where we can support the book or author. Would love to see the story continue and see the sports festival and see kei meet class 1A

Too drawn out, things worth 3 paragraphs at most end up taking close to 5 chapters insteadAnnoying ass characters even for a cultivation novelNot worth readingLack of development in all places

I love how you started the novel. It seemed a lot more interesting. And I especially liked your synopsis—short and concise. Keep up the good work, author!

This is going to be the most honest review you will find. This book is a fun read and thats what it is. There are many grmmar mistakes but you can deal with them and the author is indian so understandable. Also the charecters are really stale and corny. Overall iff you want a really solid book with an in depth story this is not the one but if you just want a fun read to relax to this is it.

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It is still early days but this is a good but fairly cliche story so far.  The most obvious issue is the desperate need of an editor.  Not just for grammar/spelling assistance but also to help cut out unneeded duplication.  For example, we don't need to see the character screen that many times when literally nothing has changed.

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