Choosing the Perfect Husband (HIATUS) - Reviews

I read the first two chapters of your novel and I liked the plot line. It's very interesting. Also, the dialogue flow between the characters is amazing! But it would be a clean and a clear read if you give some information about the situation and the setting but apart from that, its a worthy read! Keep up the good work!

grammar makes you want to vomit, main character personality is all over the place. (ie on earth he is a really nice man, like how he saved a female traveler at the start... later on when he gets stronger someone gets impaled by a water spear by their teacher in front of him because person offended him{person said get out of my chair or something equivalent} and he did not care at all.(there's so many more examples of this as well). the foundation of the story is unique, interesting and new I love the idea of growing by understanding the laws of the world, but author you need to improve before trying to write a concept like this, its too hard for someone of your skill level to try this

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Dora and Steve look for the person he found... as they look at the person they were shocked for a moment.

"Is there a problem?"

I got angry at that joke, so I got up with my food and walked away. I sat at the empty table, and to my surprise, Error came back and sat down. I forgot that Error sat at the enpty table, so I ignored the fact that she was there for a bit. Eventually, I noticed Error drawing. Her art was like none I had ever seen before. I said quietly to her," That's a nice drawing."

Volulme 3-end is free for all!

On the rooftop opposite.

You'll never shine if you don't glow

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

Gotham City; August 9th; 1:16 EDT