But You Said You'd Give Me Delicious Candy!! - Reviews

Mttl?........................................................................................................................................................

The story is cliche. And the progression of story is also a bit slow. Author tries too much in writing detailed description of even the tiniest things, which become exhausting to read, when we know cliche scenarios are going on in the story.

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Now Karna had 3 paths before him, one he could stimulate his bloodline and increase its density, two he could try to awaken the Divinity, three he could cultivate .

"What? Do not! I cannot become one of those horrible mutants! I am the daughter of the prophet! I must remain pure! " said Tarnorie, suddenly becoming pale as she stared at the wound.

I replied like I'm not really interested.

[Further, the skill [Claw Strike] becomes [Power Strike]. ]

The one who called out my name was my classmate and friend, Maria, who unlike me, has her name match her gender. She's completely oblivious to this awkward feeling. I also told her to not shout my damned full first name more than a hundred times already.

A girl that always loves the attention

bring about a War never seen in history. The ancient law had been broken, chaos was being to run amok and the equilibrium was shattered causing havoc and discord to run amok.

"Let's eat!" Rika said.

"Assistan!" the doctor shouted.