Burra: A Collection of Short Stories In the Shaper Universe - Reviews

this book is like if you took Library of heavens path, turned it into a system version, gang-banged only I level up with Lin fan's confidence, but without as many insults.

This nobel... I felt it has lot of potential.... In the beginning it was quite good... But after 50 chaps... Many things have no logic or common sense....Grammer mistakes....

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i haven't even read it and i know it i will love it140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140

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The characterisation of the different people appearing in this story is what sold me on it. The worldbuilding is good and the characters are enjoyable to read about. I think there are certain aspects of this story that could be done better, like the formatting of the text in some parts. However, other than that, it is a book with a lot of promise and I hope to see the author get even better in the future. Good luck, keep it up!

It's very good, although the beginning is a little annoying, the truth is that it goes from worse to better.  everything is changing for the better at least from chapter 80, the Author realizes his mistakes and corrects them.  And it improves exponentially from chapter 150. So, I consider that if it is worth ignoring the other comments and reading it, I sincerely have faith in it and the most fair thing would be for you to give it a chance to judge for yourself

Yu Yan did not recognise this man.

Dan aku pun bertanya pada ibu....

"Yes.." I said touched my chest pocket, It was empty, No money I have. I never expect this offer from her.

"Artemis!!! My dear, you are just in time. Come tell this useless father of yours how unbefitting training in the woods is for a young lady" My mother says as she comes around the table and hugs my tiny frame in her arms. Her breasts squeezing me. The color of my mother eyes are purple and right now they are shining due to how emotional she is. She might be old fashion on most things but she really treasures her children.

4 1/2 years ago......