Building My Paradise - Reviews

Building My Paradise
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Writing quality: no glaring grammar issues or spelling mistakes;Stability of updates: no issues;Story development: inconsistent, one sentence person has an axe, in the next sentence it’s a sword and these inconsistencies are literally everywhere, boring revenge plot, it’s not even apparent at the start what his revenge is about;Character design: rather one-dimensional and plain;World background: inconsistent
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Have Added To The Library . The novel seems to be fun but I haven't read much , just started , will read after completing some other few but this five start is for the author . This is to show the Respect for the Author Persistence .
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UPDATES PLEASE ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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I picked this up while browsing an I am most definitely glad I checked this out the interactions between Aurelia and her teacher/system are great the story seems really interesting and so do the characters........ just hope we find out what happens/happened to the person who killed everyone at some point.
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Has this romance, harem or any love interest? Cuz so far (Chapter 34) I have seen many hints to a future harem, but there are no tags containing it.
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The leader of the group quickly fired an arrow wrapped in a strange blackish liquid towards the Shadow's arm. The night monster paid no attention to this projectile, thinking it would only pass trough its foggy body. To its surprise, the arrow cut off its arm and freed Harel. The shady humanoid gave up a pain cry before jumping back. The wide, cryptic smile on its face disappeared, replaced by an angry expression. It stared at what was left of its arm, noticing the presence of a familiar black liquid: the Erebus' Elixir.
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"Setidaknya tidak seperti yang kau lakukan!"
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No matter What Kakashi does, He couldn't use a single Jutsu, His Chidori disappeared a long time ago, it was like...his chakra has been sealed off because of this winter
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"Yep, any particular requests?" The Goddess asked. She quite liked the feeling of pulling his cheeks, but it can only stretch so far… maybe she should make him a rubber man or something…
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Okay. Are you doing peekaboo? I love peekaboo*.
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"I want to be the only person here."Brianna raised her voice.

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