Build The Strongest Family in the Prirate World - Reviews

haha I like author's enthusiasm personally~ in author's review it pulled me into reading it and I can't say how much I like it some places can use a bit tweaking and fixing leaving that aside it seems to be a well thought out story author's thanks for the story~

I’ve read until chapter the recen chapter which is chapter 8.The writing quality is very good, almost no writing mistakes. Although a slow story development as I can see it’s good.Updating stability is decent, 2-3 chapters dailyStory development is also good. I’m not good at writing review so Im just writing what I think. I think it’s unique, ehh the start I mean. Also for the future the world background would be be eh big considering what would happend.Character design is good: his character is till in development, still young but yeah it’s ok.

Was this novel drop? Please update more chapters. I really want to read this novel. I wish this novel will have regular updates. Thanks you very much for the treat.

I must the first chapter is an original way to start out the novel. However, I must say it really picks up later. So, I must say that both his sister and mother better be in the harem. Heh, I especially love the cute scenes between the MC and the sister. Good ole’ booty spanking for punishment. Heheheee. I also hope that she is his first time to be honest. I also wish that the girls actually stay relevant throughout the story and not a vase. Like, make them useful for the MC if you get what I’m saying. Anyways, I do hope the author finishes this novel since I get the feeling that this novel will quite good if the author keeps up with the good work so far. (Only on chapter 6 so far) Go team Xiao Che and Xiao Tan!!!! Also, I think the harem should be around 10 girls give or take. Heh, whatever is fine to be honest. Just make the girls stay relevant. Anyways, keep up the good work author!

will   there   be   part    2   of    it???

this is the first novel that I've red that the mc reveal his secrets(not about his reincarnation) and I still love it. the author execute this in a very smart way. the mc tells half truth which is very fun and interesting. please read this

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This is just bad.A lot of things don't make senses.For an mc who regress to the past is very stupid.The plot holes are too many.Plus the author kills the story by giving the mc all that op talents.

The concept is great. But the story flow is so incoherent and random that you have no idea what is happening. Mc mining ores in a cave, devil girl drops onto his front. Mc running away, stuck in ground 10 feet under. It's so abrupt and random, no transition or explanation.Half the story mc is talking in his lalaland and readers have to make guesswork all the time what is happening. Is this the flashback or was it happening to mc now?So, in summary, it's confusing and the author is mostly talking to himself about the key points of the story. It is missing a lot of context and the transitions are not there.

Little grammer problem. But its very good so for everyone who is afraid that this will be another chinese cliche novel its not . it might have the elements but its far from it its amazing. The begining it might be disliked but there is a reason for. All characters have their own life, and personality. NO AWE over MC. The seniors respect the younger peoples choice. And xia Yu I am looking forward her character development.

Al can l is that I hope the writer do esn’t change the stor.y

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