Broken one - Reviews

Main problem is a lot of characters are added in within a few chaps and it’s hard to keep track of them.              .                                                                                                                                                                                                   .

I'm sorry but I just can't take it anymore this novel is a cluster f**k of ideas a d sub plots that NEVER go anywhere. the author literally tries to give the MC everything like everything on top of everything and just when you think oh kool is gonna be OP nope he gets his ass kicked and dragged into a bunch of crap honestly I don't even think this a story about the MC I think he just gets dragged around and into crap over and over and over again half it just doesn't even make sense. it's pretty pathetic. this novel has potential but it lacks focus.

...........????The story is really interesting, it has lot of potential. Truely looking forward for more......................?????

I can't wait for the next chapter. ???????????????????????????????????????????????. More please

Honestly, from the sypnosis, I can tell there is nothing new in the storyline (apart from the usual 10000 return b******t) but still expectant of the book and what it holds in store for us

Started out really well but after about chapter 30-40, the MC leaves his world and so it no longer becomes an apocalypse story but closer to a an isekai.  Granted, I am only about 80+ chapters into it at this point, but I was expecting something completely different from the description and name of the story.  It's not bad and I can see why others would enjoy it, but it no longer holds my interest. I might pick this back up later, but for now I am going to have to drop this novel.

A third voice is heard then.

Anna nervously laughed " I didn't live a great childhood. Since my mother death and the remarriage of my father, I've been bullied, beaten and  mistreated for no reasons. In only one month, I lost the weight I should have lose in one year. Of course, my father was blind and didn't move a finger. It was too late when he realized my stepmother and stepsister's actions. I already vanished and was nowhere to be found. To stabilized his conscious, he didn't make Miha the heir. Even if she was the heir, she wouldn't have much glory."

After taking two rounds, the Babies were bored, so they tried to go back to the hut.But, the whole area was around 1 sq kms and they were "lost".Aaku Kaka gathered around both of his brothers, growling at any unseen danger. ChuChu who was very intelligent, tapped shoulders of Aaku Kaka, and directed him to follow..interestingly, his idea was to travel in one direction, but, unluckily, that was not the direction of their home, but, that of Rich Neighbour No. 2. The Babies, when they saw the Mansion, were confused, as their home was very small.But, the curiosity took over them, so they went in. The Mansion was made of Marble surrounded by Fruit trees, plants of different kinds, shrubberies, and grap wineries. As a Greedy person can smell gold, Aaku Kaka knew from his intuition, that all of these were edible, so at the first sight he went for them.

Crystal smiles and says "Ok I will stay with Grey and Jack will stay with you. Just remember not to get caught. We have school tomorrow."

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

"Ahhh…. That will never get old Gohan" Issei laughed as the others nodded in agreement while Xenovia and Gasper were filled in by Asia.