The story is well-written but the editing needs a lot of work. A lot of the chapters are duplicated or completely out of order, so it pulls you out of this awesome story because there's missing chapters early on. I'd recommend it more if it wasn't so confusing to read, especially the two part chapters. Authors/editors should re-check the posted chapters and fix them, it's such a good story it'd be a shame to have it suffer due to such a simple oversight that could be easily remedied.
