Bonded to the Alpha Twins - Reviews

I love this warhammer fanfic and would love to see it continued. the story is very unique compared to other fanfics I've read and the character development is very well written it does make me sad though that the author decided to stop writing on such a massive cliffhanger. I'd love to see this fanfic being updated again and I hope that the author hasn't decided to drop it completely.

Good translation.That's about it.It was fun at the beginning, but after some chapter, we got the same pattern again and again.Plus the "strange" relation with women. Plus the racism (i stopped when the MC got a Korean singer beat up by a mob, principally because he's korean).My bad, it's not racism, as the MC tell us over and over again, it's nationalism xDThe funny thing is, the MC keeps telling us about how Chinese are the best, but he is only doing plagiarism.The irony is delicious, but I think the author is too dumb to spot it.

I'm so sad. It was so good. The first 352 chapters are a fairly "original" take on the give disciples things get stronger genre. It was fun and I greatly enjoyed reading it. HOWEVER, from chapter 353 it is a copy and paste of "The Most Generous Master Ever". Blatantly. There are only small changes like names and some references to his past disciples and his system.

This is the third story about a Clan that I have been excited about. I really hope that it gets picked. The first 25 chapters that I have read make me hopeful about the rest of the story.

Shamelessly reviewing my own novel hehehehe. I'm encouraging people to read this novel of mine and place their thoughts in the comment. I'm open to all criticism as I believe that it can improve my writing. I hope you all enjoy your reading. Thank you very much.I plan to upload 1 chapter a day-Lazy Gamer.

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I am interested in the universe it presents because it is enormous, at least in terms of Veldona's reach, and although I am more into characters with more grounded and not so exaggerated levels of power, I like how variable it is in terms of how it represents them.ps: 1 is an OG, he was ready to leave with his head held high, hope he comes back

job: chaos age:7   Race : heavenly god seal

I quietly dismiss myself after church and basically run to my car. I make sure no one follows and hop in.

I vaguely remember receiving a package this morning but when my head becomes clearer, I suddenly remember the event that was happening last night. That scary pop up message.

"I don't want to go in" I told myself softly, "but I hope I find whatever is in there and just get it over with". I slowly waved the candle around to see if i ended up in front of the path, and i was. I started the same steps as i did last time. I slowly stretched my arm to the fence, swang my right leg over the fence, took a deep breathe, pushed myself over, and finally crossed over my other leg. For the first time in my life i was in the dark forest. I looked back and i saw how my house looked much smaller from the other side of the fence.

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older