Billionaire's Lost Angel - Reviews

Anime adaptation: Bottom Tier Character, Tomozaki.

At the beginning I thought it was a interesting book but it's so long and it started loosing the excitements, I have read better books, actually a lot of Chinese novel, this one is the only book I actually skipped a lot of chapters bcos I was bored and sadly this is were I end the book, good luck to those who are willing to complete it, if I was to rate this book, it'll only earn one ⭐ from me.

Sigh Wish this got a harem ending instead of that b*llsh*t

Thought it was good since it had 5 star rating. But well it did not have anything special, anything memorible just a plain all-time-hated sly villainess like girl and even worse sonofabeaches trying to take her down while she has to have a man to cling on to get saved. First two chapters got me because THE DRAMA!! But mehhh it was not enough to continue after i reached twenty few.

its just they have alot of plot twist and a preety long story but once when the whole story is completed do try to re-read it you'll find it more amazing.

I love Alisha too much ...

Stopped at chapter 4. I don’t like how the development of the story was written. Confusing.

This book is very good. I have been searching for a similiar book for weeks. I would recommend this book to everyone who likes WH40K and The Gamer.

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Hello Fellow Daoist! If you're new, I'm sure you're here in the Review Section to see if the story is actually worth reading, right? Honestly though, the early chapters are really crappy especially Chapters between 1 and 20 or maybe even more. Why? Well, I created this just for fun so I never really had a plot prepared when I started writing this so I just wrote what ever ideas that pops out in my mind. What I didn't expect is that I would actually get a contract for it because you know~..the story was just out of a hobby, right? So to those new readers out there, if you could at least get past maybe around chapter 30 or 40? I could at least tell you that the story slowly gets better and better. After all, I'm just a noob writer with almost no experience in writing novels. And if you read past those chapters that I mentioned above but you think that story is still the same like it didn't even have a change? Then maybe it isn't your cup of tea after all, sorry. Anyway, best of luck to us! ^_^ Peace! / NOTE: For the last time! It was clearly mentioned that weapons bought from the [System] or weapons created after the purging are the only usable weapons and weapons after WWII is a no no. NOTE TWO: You would only comment about modern weapons being a plot hole if you just skimmed or didn't even read the early chapters at all.Important Note: I will delete reviews that just rants about the story flow in the early chapters because it didn't go what they wanted it.Please leave reviews with constructed criticism that points out mistakes in the story where it needs improvement.Keep in mind that the story was only written as hobby before it was contracted, so I just wrote whatever comes to my mind.P.S the Stronghold needed to be built in a place indicated by the [System] on his map, it can't be just built anywhere the MC wanted. God, I'm tired of explaining ****! Just read the fucking whole chapters from 1 to 10, all of it was explained there! So stop being a brat and write your own if the story doesn't go the way you wanted it!

This novel is funny af nd it has a lot cool character in it i love the how he learned his lesson after almost getting killed and then learn how to not be cocky

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