Billion years Beast system - Reviews

I'm so in love with Jo and Jude. I have already read Knowing Jude at least 5 times. When this is completed I will read it at least that many times too! If you haven't had the pleasure of reading Knowing Jude go and check it out, then come back for Loving Jude! Follow S.H Waen for more great books!!

I got to Chapter 10 and had to stop reading, the lack of paragraph breaks, not even a break between characters talking, just makes this story read like a mess if you revisit this and break up the blobs I'd be happy to read this

There were rows and rows of cells with big granite doors only openable with a special key, however I wasn't planning to open any. It was so overwhelming, like a hell under a hell. What did these people do to be here, how did they get here? Are these even people?  My mind rushed to get mindless thoughts into my head but I ignored them. I ran at top speed for about 1km on the rocky paths of the dungeons, under a mouldy roof and in a clammy and cold atmosphere.