Beyond Reality - Reviews

You have an extremely amazing book here. I would love to see more!

It seem people on this site would swallow any trash qi throws at them This novel is cliche and not as good as people say it is I'm even suprised it managed to get n0 2 ranking

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This book is the example of good ideas, but poor choices. You can clearly notice when the author switched from good writing to just pure s*x and dirty/lowkey s*xist jokes. However, chapter 741. I can overlook and cringe at edgy 13 year old humour, but what the author writes is borderline r*pe of the main character. His best friends get him seriously dr*nk, and the girl that had a crush on him for 'years' (An example of another forgetten storyline from chapters ~400) takes him to a bed. She when cl*mbs and makes red marks on the bed to suggest that they had s*x and guilt trips him next morning to have s*x again. This is not cute, and as someone that had a similar experience, the least the author could had done is given a trigger warning. I even wonder how webnovel would allow something like this on their site.

pick me ,pick me , pick me up, pick me,pick me, pick me up i want you pick this up. realy just pick this one.its great novel.far away from usual cliche novel.

I don't see how anyone can like this hes too naive it's annoying and he's getting controlled like a little *****. I do this bec gramps says so, I gotta be cute bec this goddess says so, oh he's being annoying let's let the demon god bully him ? not even good and him tryna be cute is not cute at all it's annoying. The system is not even strong at all to if it's letting others control him?

probably one of the surprisingly good yet underrated book out there in this site. I don't understand how this book hasn't taken off yet but to those who happen to be reading my review you should definitely go and try out this book and see what I am saying. I think for the most part you'd agree with what I say specially when you compare the quality of the books on this site. it's pretty good .

Worst fanfic i read in a while :( The mc got 3 systems but barely use them,he got gamer mind but it doesn't work at all,11 years since he is reborn but barely trained, follow totally the canon story(30 chapters and the only thing different is saving the mother of luna...),don't use is brain at all(know all the major plot of the hp universe but don't prepare at all(troll)),i could keep going but the last thing i will write is it's the worst mc i ever read about(1000+ fanfic read). Iusually don't write review but i take the time to write this one to tell people to never start reading this *****. Don't lose your time, you can find a lot better to pass time, and don't listen to the author who tell you that only the 20 first chapter are like this , it's all the f***ing story ...

Only 14 chapters so far but it has already gotten me hooked. The story is a bit slow-paced, but honestly, I think it's worth getting through as it allows for steady character and world-building and as a result, the author is painting us a much better picture of the world they've envisioned.

As of Chapter 110Writing Quality: 5/5Little to no mistakes. I will not say that there are no mistakes as i might have missed them. However, i have not spotted any mistakes thus far.Story Development: 4/5The story development is great but nothing extraordinary. My only issue with this story was him attaining the ear rings at the beginning as it felt relatively plot armourish to me. Besides that the development is interesting. The first arc was relatively bland in my own opinion though (dungeon arc). However, the current school arc is great. The introduction of new characters who have this sense of mystery around them is interesting. Character Design: 4/5The MC is a goblin based character that can evolve. This is nothing new among light and web novels. The character has a grimdark vibe which I personally like. The fact that the MC cannot remember much of his past life allows the author to cover alot of potential plot holes which was a great and simple idea. The side characters have are interesting as well as you can tell that there is a story behind each and everyone of them. I personally cannot wait to see their backgrounds.Updating Stability: 5/5If i could i would gibe this a 10 out of 5. Daily updates.World Background: 4/5Pretty cliche litrpg vibe. Magic and monsters. World wise, the area in which the MC has gone to are only 3 locations so far. However this novel is pretty new so there is alot of potential to expand.Overall: 4.4I will say that this is one of the better novels on this application. The main thing this story is lacking a something unique. This story is relatively cliche and nothing about it stands out compared to most other novels. However, despite it being cliche, the author still wrote the story very well. The best thing about this novel so far are the mysteriousness of the side characters. The side characters alone have enough impact that a novel can be written for them (biggest difference compared to other novels). For this i give props to the author. I would even go to say that this novel has one of the best side characters so far. I hope this story contunues and will continue to support this novel.

Finally a reincarnated nonhuman novel without the mc constantly trying to be human. There are barely any humans in the story! This is exactly the kind of novel I was looking for. A new life, new family, new culture and instincts, not filled with constant identity crisis or self doubt, mc was able to make a clean cut from his previous identity and truly accept his new one. It’s basically the story of a young dragon’s life (so far), with the transmigation only affecting that he was conscious from birth and as good way for reader immersion as he used to be ‘one of us’. Well done author!

The maid instantly tensed up, but it was nothing compared to me. I had already stirred up my magical storage, ready to unleash my attack if needed. The tone of the newcomer, a middle-aged male, was definitely not friendly. There was no guarantee on the part that he would be co-operative… Still, why did I have the feeling that I knew this voice somewhere else?