Beyond Immortality: From Mortal to Divine - Reviews

ok guys the story is good, a bit dumb mc i guess, thinks he owes a debt of some kind to every girl character he meets( some childhood friend/ princess who unfriended on the spot when he was weak and then suddenly misses him when he is becoming strong and the dumb mc of course helps her in every ocassion, some rich merchant princess who has absolute no use to him but acts like her knight in every of her troubles, some wolf princess who follows him without being asked for few days and suddenly becomes long lost lovers after coming back, gets in trouble then expects to be rescued as if its his duty. His whole life would be spent being pawns of other people.Recommend me some stories without these dumb MCs, where the mc doesn't feel the need to rescue every damsel in distress like long lost lovers

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One of the more interesting and better translated novels so far. There are detail inconsistencies but at least it flows like proper English.MC has an insanely broken powering mechanic but it's looking like the story will focus more on world development, politics, and character interactions which is leagues better than a non stop powering fic.Author also tries to explain some logical/scientific inconsistencies which somewhat works as long as you don't think too much about it.Easily one of the top 3 stories we got for the past month.

honestly its a very good novel tho i put 5 star update time in hopes that the author updates more he has or she has a very interesting concept and story thats well written id love to read it more often

Hey! I'm the author of this novel. Below I'll be posting scheduling updates on The Maid's Secret. And make sure to check out the other books in this series; The Countess and her Knight, and The Beast of Whitlock Manor.

the author has perfectly written two chapters, which already tells us a lot. The character is very well written, I liked the balance. I would like to see minor conflicts in which the author and the main character will play and pretend to be weak, create an incredible drama artificially))) author you best!

His mind starts to wonder about the incident yesterday, where he was stopped from entering before the Fourth Prince's courtyard, in front of the massive crowd. When he strode back to his own house, whispers of ridicule greet his ears. Even his brother, who was once a young man of valour, now looking a bit haggard, warned him and asked about his intentions for escorting the princess.

"Good answer. Now, which world do you want to go?" Demon king asked him. There are so many worlds he could go, but he could only choose one at a time.

Are you reposting? Won't drop it again?

On the ground, Mutallu gasped for air like a fish out of water. His coloring was atrocious, and his hands shook with weakness.

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

This book is pretty good i like the characters so far and the story is decent. It is a bit all over the place but does seem interesting.The first few chapters are partially just walls of text and world background but it does explain the world a bit.The plot of this book is really interesting and has potential