Becoming the Elf King's bride - Reviews

very good nevel.with good world building and power system.first 100 chapter are very good after that chapter are mtl and it will be hard to follow. I liked this novel and wanted to continue but couldn't with the mtl. its's very annoying.and it's not good mtl I had read some mtl and some had good mtl but this one is very bad mtl.i give 5 for first 100 chapter and 1 for rest so i put 3 for rating for this novel.i hope someone latter edit this novel.

Currently read through chapter 9. the plot seems intriguing from what I have read so far.  Got me hooked and added to the library. A good read indeed,.

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ok so...1.Translation Quality, not the greatest but not bad a lot of mixed up names and also wrong words used in some sentences etc but still better than MTL2. Stability of updates, of updates so far are ok but also not that great and i say that because we get 2 chapters a day which is good but those chapters are 12 hrs apart which might as well feel like 1 chapter a day.3. Story Development, so far story's pacing is pretty  good that's all.4. Character Design, the characters in the story so far are good and not as annoying as other stories.5. world background, as of chapter 80 not much is known of the world we know of very few locations and those are only briefly mentioned. 6. as for why i gave this novel a 1 star is to more effect the overall value that it currently has, we got people just throwing out 5 stars without actualling judging the novel etc so i think people need to throw out 1 stars to counter said people that think everything is gold

Garbage translator making chapters longer by putting in the original text at the end. Nothing bad to say about the story itself. Waiting to see if they’ll finally make a change to pay for this again

So a good novel (would've been more awesome ) but came to a sh it type cz of the braindeadness of the characters...mc came from a modern world cz of some obsession...he succeeded too...then start as a generic cultivation novel setup... though a bit of twist (only a little ) ...then both the mc and his sister take most of the shi t choices they can...they can't cultivate but later can and get the op talent of all ...yet they give up all the benefits of the powerful god level family to go t a lower world without any protection or anything just to have a f king struggle powerup...which they could easily get from the family...and they don't have any shi t knowledge of any details of anything in particular as well...and the f king mc didn't even have his caution for this as well...I mean this maybe a good novel base but the most f king sh it character setup for mc and sh it decision making...well read at your own risk...

With an author on hiatus and a novel that seems written by The Plagiarist I can't help but feel dissapointed. Thanks for the eighty chapters.

I hope all of you enjoy this read, if you do feel free to leave a review and maybe even support it by adding the novel to your library and voting with power stones. If you see any mistakes or repetitions anywhere, feel free to point them out in the comments for that chapter.

This story has immense potential, writing wise it is very good. Pacing is kind of off sometimes and either needs to slow down in some cases, or is just going too fast. These are just minor things that the author can get better at quickly. As for update stability I cant say much yet as there are only 4 chaps. Worldbuilding is solid along with character design. Cheers!

I support this novel, it's an interesting name, a good script writing, and I'm waiting for the next chapter

"Who's it?"

I'm mixed on a few things. Harry seems to be dragging tons of folks from home with him. Dobby and Winky came as a set and were only 2 pawns so are understandable. They were basically part of his household anyway.Sirius, I can write off. He is an *****, but in many ways I could see him enjoying the DxD harem setting. It fits his personal view points much better than home ever did.I enjoyed this chapter. The part with Ron beating Sona worked for me. Ron still has that relationship advice contract with Harry left. I can see where Harry is trying to word things for Ron. Hey bud, you and Hermione had a fun time, but fought a lot. You know if I was around you'd both use me to try to keep you going. It's not that you couldn't hook back up with her, but at this point, I think it'd be better if you give that relationship a rest and see if you could move on with someone else.Sona chasing after Ron would be amusing. I could actually see Ron not that interested in being a devil. At first glance it sounds nice, but the idea of outliving his rather large family? No, I don't think he'd be able to do that.That wouldn't actually stop them from hooking up though. It's not like Ron would live much more than 200 or so. With the Weasley fertility, she might actually pop out a few dozen kids. That'd stun everyone.I can see Harry 's group being viewed as a joke for the moment. Only the vampire girl is really powerful. She keeps beating Harry. They've not really fought anyone.Sirius dodged and survived his fights with his two fallen, but that was more domestic after sex stuff than real fights. Then again that could have been worse than normal fights as well.I can't wait for folks to keep underestimating Dobby and Winky, but then each are able to pull off feats of magic/cleaning/staff work that would take an entire damn estate. It should impress those that really have to put on those fancy dinners.I enjoyed Serafall and Harry playing around. them having a bit of moment wasn't that bad. That they had kinky sex? That was sort of out of left field. If anything, that's more of a brief fling that could have been better.Serfall is old and broken far more than Valerie. I wasn't expecting this side of her, but it actually doesn't seem that out of character for her either. She can have her little hook ups and get it out of both of their systems.It seems like she's done this before.  Harry is trying to play the kinky sex angle as that's what she wants. He can do it as that's what she really needs.Itll be rather funny when he next sleeps with Valerie. I could just see her asking. So is Serafall going to join in?Harry would shudder. He might have had a nice night with her, but long term? Her kinks aren't his kinks. Nope. He'd wish her well, but he wouldn't want her as a regular member of his girls.It would be funny if Harry has increased fertility due to the method of his transforming into a devil. Serafall and that other random girl both happen to be knocked up.That could cause some fun interesting drama issues. It's not that Serafall wouldn't want to be a mother. It's more that it would be totally unexpected. Then there is that one night stand girl. She could pop up who knows how long in the future to cause confusion.I like the idea of Daphne and Tracey both having a long flirting/dating thing with him to see if they really want the harem bit. They've got all the time in the world now for that.If anything, they should look at it that harry is likely the only male their age that they'd likely live with from now on. Oh, they could still do an entire HP magical life, but that husband would die off while they could keep on living.There is also the thing with the fallen claiming the magical world as theirs. Um, tech Harry and his group are the only natives that could lay claim to it. If they had enough personal power, they could kick the fallen out. Then they'd have church issues.