Beast - Reviews

I was enjoying the book until chapter 45. Then the author took a weird turn by adding 'advanced' guns to the story. I get that time has passed and technology has advanced but dude you ruined the story by adding that.

Website : qidian china Views : 31.07 million Rating : 7.8(5146) Chapters : 1261Status : completedWord count : 4.10 million author rank : platinum

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great story and very good to see the development of the protagonist since it is very real for a cultivation story with an interesting premise and development One more question and did you stop with the novel for good or is this temporary hiatus?

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They all stared at Shu Ren, while being curious about what really happen and what he did to make this two beast passed out.

"you said you finished up the trials, have you any idea what is happening outside" - monitor man

"Maybe some other time," I replied. "I just want to get home and cool myself."

"Hmmm...ok...I just can't believe that this will be the first time I'm meeting your parents...and at this kind of situation...ha ha..." Queshia chuckled bitterly

Please review and comment as you read. Hopes you enjoy the story.

At least the story about Daniel empire is good but it needs some adjustments in character and focus and some action to make it more okay you are trying

This looks very promising, I've only read a few chapters and i'm hooked. You have to check it out, it's really good, nice work author!?