Be my Big Sister! [Discontinued] - Reviews

its only been 4 chapters but I'm so hooked in the novel right now. maybe author san is one of my fav.......................................

I was able to read eight chapters so far and here is my review:It has an amazing plot. The introduction was able to grab my attention. The looks of the characters are easy to portray since they are detailed. I could also convey their emotions and character interaction is great as well. The novel is not the cliche type since I was captivated to read further with no typos or errors found when it comes to vocabulary. It was an excellent read and I didn't get bored when reading it. The story development is a bit slow which is fine with me since it does not damage the plot. Another negative I noticed was that there were some misused punctuation but nothing to deter from the read. Another positive thing about the novel is the author's writing style. It is definitely better than some authors here in Webnovel. Paragraphs are also in the perfect length and so far, nothing seemed wordy or whatsoever. Good luck to the author!

I really, really like the premise of this one. It made me curious right away. The "Freakquency" turns people either into monsters, or heroes. but what determines which the person will become? How do they deal with the monsters? Who will be a hero? It's very intriguing.

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"Lie... , don't say you want ..."

Merasakan ingin keluar, aku memnekan kepala serly dan mengeluarkan semua cairan kental kedalam mulutnya.

"Kaenji!" I shouted, calling Kenji. Kenji turned back with his overrated 'turn back'. "What's up?" Not seen anxious face at all from his face, instead, a cheerful face seen.

I look to the stars and moon and know that's soon it shall..BOOM.

  "I can tolerate their mistakes because they can always amend them. You, however, have shown how disloyal you can be. You went against my orders. "

Lapiz: Oh for goodness sake Luma your making a big deal out of it. Relax what would possibly be there anyway?

Piccolo shouted with some fear of being injured ... but to everyone's surprise, the Saiyan simply blinked, where his eyes returned to normalcy, and in that he looked at them curiously and strangely for the account of Piccolo's cry.

"This is a simple program just for those who want to be with someone but can't. You can open your heart to me so that I can deliver it to your beloved. Haha."