Ava Lynn's Mate - Reviews

I'll rate five stars for now. plot is good, but familiar, I'll have to see how things turn out.It has good concept but can be a tad run - on at times,  Could use a bit better structure and transitioning.  But the story is there, if you wanna work for it.

I love the story until you get to the \" wait fir new chapters \" crap.  I now have yo books I'm invested in reading but I get some little dribble of a chapter a day ?  I can read that in 10 minutes ! I refuse to start another book and be kept hanging!

"You really made a fool out of us. Now you are going to pay for the crimes that you did!" Barakiel said while arrogantly looking down on him.