Ascending Elisian - Reviews

Really good book , I just feel the ending was rushed. Otherwise it would have been a 5 star book.

Best one this year, really hope it continues filler filler filler something words bored of writing stuff filler filler xlbwofhqovfoajciiqbdojrhwodjjf

Decent novel. Quite good so far. Author should use “Grammarly” to fix grammatical error. Its free, so use it. Hope the novel will be better. Good luck author.

So far this story has been to the same standard as previous Doever works; super well written!Currently the story is only beginning so there's not much to critique fairly, but this truly does create a more "plausible" and as far as I am aware, unique, take on the Evolution LITRPG genre so far.Will edit/make a new review once the story has progressed further  and their is more content to review!

It is noice. keeep reading.....................                                                                                                        

I love it so far just I hope you don’t make the protagonist always tried to hide his abilities like most other novels it’s kinda annoying and old doing that... (hide abilities and act like a scary cat... young master shows up .... face snaking time the hides and repeats a thousand times ) Lol I hope you make him a a genius that is more open about it but so far I like this novel keep up the good work! :)

Duke had knocked out three guards with the help of a couple girls, so Michelle and Sable turned to the last guard, only to see him restrained by the girls. He cursed as the four remaining girls held him down.

"This place is beautiful," I responded, "thank you for taking me here today."

"And by the way, I feel like I should tell you something. The reason why I haven't maxed your level non-stop is because your body needs time to adjust for every new evolution."

"I know pumpkin, but it just ain't my thing, plus it's not like you have anything I've never seen before".

              Sying who until recently was watching his young master, now, he was on the side of Zhong Liang, his little snout was sniffing Zhong Liang's boots and he barked with pleasure.

He made a gesture and both Sirzechs, Grayfia and Serafall felt a invisible force constricting around their bodies. They could no longer move, they couldn't breath and it was forcing them to their knees.