Asaris Online - Reviews

Nice novel.Please update regularly and please add more 18+ scenes,hehe.I will alway full star in review.Thanks ???????????????

When are you going to update also i live your story it is on my top five list!!! And that saying something because i have read like 400+ books

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

I've read a lot of video game novels and even though this novel isn't the greatest, it's still really good. While there could be improvements to the writing quality i.e. some grammar/spelling mistakes it's still really good. In chapter 37, there were a lot of errors so the author released 2 chapters as a compensation for that and Usfal also fixed the errors. This novel is a solid 4.6/5

A really good read aside form the plot to make MC alone, the rest is ok...

Wow. amazing. update fast it's very interesting. I love Emerson already. he is the best. I love Jenny too. they look very good together. It never lacks interest

Sure honey.

"I'm not."

She started her calls, looking at the board with the two new names written on it; Dewey and Sara. Idly, while she greeted the customer, she wondered if they would last here.

"I WILL FUCKING KILL YOU NIGGA PUT ME DOWN" screamed Nevaeh.

Darkline looked at Avery sadly, feeling disgruntled. Why was his rider always so mean? He stared at the squire, Rhoan, hoping that he would be nicer!

Me: Jogging mom!!!! (AND RAN FROM THERE)