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Whoa...such an amazing, intriguing storyline. I'm so reading this.
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Don't read it if you are Japanese or Korean, you'll have to get past a lot, A LOT, of undeserving hatred. Not sure which other nationalities the author goes for after chapter 660.It was a fun read at the beginning. Fun power system, reasonable and relatable MC, satisfying story arcs. Then baam, the author goes nuts. It was so heartbreaking to see a story you enjoy go 'Phantom Menace' on your bottom. The author makes a point of going out his way, forcing situations where foreigners are bad and jealous of the MC and deserve righteous face smacking while people all over China cheer for him. Not the tritors though. You know, people who like anything non-chinese? They soon get what they deserve.I laughed most of the times when things like this came out. Maybe because I 'm not from a country author tries to bash. We have an MC whose power and fame starts off with publishing various literature stuff he basically plagiarised (some from other foreigners that author hates) and the author is actually shameless enough to narrate the story in such a righteous tone that I cringed when I wasn't laughing. Dude, your main character isn't the genius you try to write him as nor is he better than the strawman foreigners who had actually put in real effort to better themselves. Your MC literally plagiarises the works of other great people that your power system made disappear. Your MC plagiarised Snow-white and later on you make him show off before Americans. I laughed, a lot, at the MC. It felt like the author actually turn off parts of his memories while writing some of the arcs.Let me give you a fake example which can easily fit inside this story.A Japanese reknowned poet will come to visit a Chinese university. He will be lecturing some stuff and sneering and spitting snarky remarks at the Chinese students, calling them less-them-genious and stuff. The foreign students would laugh along with some traitors. The Chinese students would get angry and shout and grind their teeth but what can they do right? Some will post the video on social media and Chinese people would get upset and stuff and call for justice but the reknowned poet would post something more infuriating. Then the Chinese celebraty MC would call for a duel, learn Japanese ancient masterful long lost poetry in a second through the system, face smack him, give a righteous lecture of how Japanese people are waste. The Chinese people will shed tear in their greatness, and face smack the foreigners again because they are great. The 'traitor fan girls' would call for MC's arrest, MC will get arrested, plagiarise a long lost poem of how prison can't hold the awesomeness of a true Chinese and people will lose their mind at his awesomeness. Some fan girls will convert and the rest will get a face smack and MC will be released and of to stealing more stuff. While at it, maybe destroy the Japan economy too, just for the sake of it.I'm not being fair. The real arcs are way more detailed and way worse. Author narrates in a way that feels like he's expecting the readers to bask in awe with MC Literacy prowess even though we know where it came from. Instant powerups with no real effort. None. Any other stories of power system at least makes an effort on top of having an op system. I would be ok with that if not for the self oblivious hypocritical story arcs.I still read it though.
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Love this series that is finished.Love this series that is finished.Love this series that is finished.Love this series that is finished.Love this series that is finished.Love this series that is finished.Love this series that is finished.Love this series that is finished.Love this series that is finished.Love this series that is finished.
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Dropped at Chapter 133.The novel has an amazing start, with the author making good use of many cliches and ideas. I can say that I was completely hooked by this novel until the MC and trupe returned to their academy... after that, I felt as if every good part was gone.The MC never tries to learn or do what he needs for that moment, always resulting in "Oh, if only I knew this~" or "If only I prepared myself". His emotional state is a total inconsistency, with him acting like a nervous child in scholar events despite his mental age and maturity displayed in past events, including close-ins with death.He is a total push-over of the plot, if the plot needs this, then it will happen even if the world itself becomes a total joke, full of laziness and retards.The characters are rather interesting, but the author seems to fear putting them in the splot-light so don't expect any kind of great development in less than 100~200 chapters.The world is... what I can say, extremely vague and messed. We have the factions and the mortals (common humans), but despite having numerous chance of gathering more information that would save their lives, they focus their times on the things forced by the plot.In resume, an excellent story with a very interesting beginning, but that wasn't properly developed, resulting in the plot being forced time and time again.
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It was a good day, indeed.
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"You two look so cute together!" His mother teased.
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Let me tell you the end as it is much more important than the beginning. It is vital to my realization and paramount to my predictions.
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Emperor Austin was shocked as well. He used to think that nothing or no one could harm Empress Rosella.
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You're bundled up now, wait till you get older
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Shameless Author here! Probably a narcissist, too, for leaving a five-star review on his own book. This is my first contracted novel (which makes me a newbie), so please feel free to leave comments if you find any mistakes here and there, and I will fix them (I have fixed a few errors thanks to a few commenters). And it will be worthwhile. This story will be updated daily with chapters, and if you have any questions, please reply below, and I will be sure to respond to them.

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