Apeno: Singkora - Reviews

Hopefully, do not do like other fanfic, where they walk as babysitter of Issei or consider him his brother, helping him while the prostagonist himself, is not even strong, and before he is perverted, make him a better person.----------------------list the candidates for the harem, consider:- sona.- tsubaki.- grayfia.- "serafall.- "ravel" phenex.- yasaka.- Gabriel.- Kuroka.- "· ingliv ·" leviatan.- and all the milf you can.------------------------You have to have your Op powers, I do not understand why always in each fanfic, they complain at the beginning if they make it strong, then when it is weak or they defeat it fast, they complain that devilucho, an Op protagonist, so that he can focus on the relationships, because if it was strong you will no longer worry, but practice every day.---------------------keep it up.

As someone coming from the undead legion, I already know that this book is going to be absolutely amazing, from reading the few chapters that is up I already love the characters.

To put it simply, it is a great book, however the translation quality is so bad that I physically cringe through half the chapters.------------------------------------------

Read all the chapters in 3 days, have been enjoying it a lot.Cool story, characters and world building, including kingdom building...There are still some grammar errors and some caused by distraction but they have been diminishing so I don't really see a problem.Only thing that i find a little annoying isn't the grammar errors but the punctuation ones, those are really important, if you could pay a little more attention to them, since they are really essential for the telling of a story and the reader's impression of it... would be a great boost to this novel.In conclusion, great work, pls don't look at my criticism as somethhing bad because that wasn't my intention and keep on doing what you do.You have something really good here, keep up :3Cheers ;)

Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................

Great book, very promising beginning, deep lore and worldbuilding. Characters are fleshed out and novel does not seem to make every second character with cookie cutter is eastern fantasy tropes.

it's an overall good book but the development if too fast. The world background is kind of lacking although it's still new I guess in the near future this would be fixed. Keep up the Good Work!

lacking a goddamn system or a cheat tag.

His eyes were still shut so he had no idea what had transpired. Opening his eyes, he saw himself at the top of a strange mountain. Where am I? he thought. *Looking around* This place doesn't seem like my continent. The land terrains and forms are completely different. Walking around for a bit, he came about a small hut on the mountain. Getting closer to the hut, a beautiful lady walked out of it. she stared towards Leo's direction for a while and started walking towards him. For the "always cool and handsome Leonardo

Wiz was an ex-high lich. Her specialty is absorbing mana or life force and she's also quite an adept in using Ice Magic. Sure her  is not as strong as Forzelotte's but it's still good enough compared to it.

        I got stunned at first. But when i recovered i give in. She's trying to get in my mouth and pulled me closer to her. I let her get in my mouth and kissed back. I respond in what she's doing. I hold her face and my other hand has been massaging her hair. She did mine too.

Semoga Edward bisa segera move on...