An Altered Fate - Reviews

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I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO YOU ALL.I just read one chapter and it's good . Better than mine .. This novel is fresh with a new concept if the author didn't mess up than it can also come in top 25. No kidding. Everyone should read it. Keep going author. You can do it. I believe in you. Don't Give up. You can do it...

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Love the story just it got dropped and I hate that so I have wrote this in Hope's that the author continues to write this novel The only character I have not liked is li na which was a character used for character development but I still don't like it

Anyone know where to get raws? or the chinese title of this novel? I quite like this novel.This is machine translated and the editing is not enough. Sometime names changes, such as Yuan and Fate being used for the same person.

Updated review now that the book has gone premium. The book has stuck to its good points and the updates have been daily without fail. More of the world is being introduced and the characters are becoming more solid.

"Face your death peasants!"

"Rika"Rika com um sorriso inocente

He always thought he was in for something big in life as a kid but after so many years of schooling, he gave up. He couldn't do it anymore so he dropped out of college and decided to just work his way up in this world.

Staring at the night sky. As if, mentally counting the stars. As if I could.

"Yeah, just go back to that stupid place you errors call a home!" Laine said.

Minato chuckles and speaks out "Well that's great news. I really wish I could talk to him. Anyways have you started with the revival jutsu?"