Okay! I just finished this story and let me tell you this! It’s a very cute story I loved every minute I was reading this and now am on to the 2nd book I believe
i have started reading since 2020 and this is the 1st one. The journey is amazing. The characters are so real and so the emotions. I fell in love with this one everytime I revisit this book
The book is intriguing. I love how you ended your chapters, it's a nice way to attract the readers. I noticed some misplaced comma but you can work with that. I also noticed the unstable use of tenses. So far, the book is great❤