I like the story but it seems the ending was quite a bit rushed. They did not deal with Qing Lou Yan in the end. Little Monster's origin was not properly explained. It just said that he could read the past and future. Nobody knows where he came from
The hell? Lambert still did not cross the line? 4 times he attempted to kill you! First was successful, second the seduction trap if not for you, third hunting trip, fourth the mines, tell me how much more would it take to cross the line? Fck this…
The plot is good but so many spelling mistakes, errors and unfinished sentences. She is in one place then suddenly another place doing something else. I had to read a few times again and again to understand what actually happened. This story really needs proofreading.
