Alpha's Gifted Mate - Reviews

Just great.. besides some troubles with the grammar and the inevitable slow-release, considering the quality, it's perfect.. It's worth the title, the MC is really badass.. the situations are created in a way that a lot of novels lack to supply the MC.. I expect some plot twists though, as if keeps steady at this pace, it might be a little saturated.. but all in all, it's great, and it only has 30 something chapters rn.. keep the great work..

I like this novel a lot. My only grief with it is that the updates aren't released at ludicrous speed. Am I at 140 yet... how about now? Just a little bit more I think

A minute of your time if you please. The reviews talking about the stupidity of the main character and plot armor in the earlier chapters is true. The reason I am not re-writing them is because i don't want to change things and then the later chapters are filled with plotholes. I am not asking for you to drag yourself through those chapters, if you can't take that stuff, then my advice to you is not to waste your time. Seeing as this is my first novel, I would like to think that my writing will get better over its course. This review is just to ward off less tolerant people, instead of them reading the novel and leaving a permanent negative review about something that I am working/have already worked on in the later chapters. I welcome criticism if it will help me improve my writing skills, but having the rating of my novel lowered because of a situation that is being solved/already been solved is just depressing. If you read to this point, thank you for your time. Hopefully, this review will not cause any misunderstandings

(Read to chapter 54)1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read.2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!”3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions. 4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion.By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.

The writing style is amazing. English is perfect for me.This is my first time following a gaming novel, but I know it will be good because the author's other novel is also very interesting. This author writes very well action scenes and gives you a good picture of the world through his words.  I highly recommend this to everyone!

I'm a fan of pretty much any pet taming/raising novel that is well written. Loving this one just as much as the others I've read. Keep on keeping on, thank you for giving me another story to read.

the story and the concept is interesting the imagination of the author is wonderful the narration goes well with the characters and story but there were few grammatical, tense errors I hope the author have fixed those in the Futher chapters overall amazing story good work author

hey author-sama, did the harem start, and if yes wt is the size                                                                                       

I like the book and Kay in particular. I especially love this being an Excorcism book. We are going full spiritual???????????????

"It's amazing Master!"

Mike and Becca both had their head down they knew they were wrong and they were really sorry for that..they were both thinking about each other..

"Eh, paano kita matatawagan wala naman ako'ng cellphone." Napakamot ako sa ulo. Napakunot naman ang noo niya sa akin.