Alpha's Feisty Luna - Reviews

I don't know how to feel about this story. I like the setting, the writing quality is much better than most fanfic, the update speed is awesome. But the MC is absolutely infuriating, it's like the author purposely make a MC with negative IQ just to tick off reader for fun. After clearing the first dungeon, he sell all the cores for money without strengthen himself. He has infinite mana yet he sell the summoning skill book( and some other skill books as well).... Fck, why the hell does he even sell skill books? Just learn everything and only sell the cores he doesn't need for money. He kept clearing dungeons multiple time and selling drops in bulk, yet he asked how did people discovered him..... Does the fcker think everyone has his IQ? On the bright side, he did learn from his mistake, but those are common sense, even a "normal" ten years old is suppose to know that. Thing might get better latter but currently I just can't stand this MC retardness.

The conversation seems so fake and cringe

broo this is just godly, really amazing man, I hope you don't drop this!!!! Though I do hope that Lu Chen ends up with meixiu!! I just really like her.

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It's a good story , i liked it !Would Recommend it if you like ruthless Mc that kill everyone to achieve his goal(Immortaly)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Must give this novel 5 rating cause why not? The tags are literally my favourite?, read upto 54 chaps and the novel is going pretty good, somethings are lacking but i believe the author will make up for it as this is just starting. Must read once.

I had two major issues with this novel. First of all, it's very repetitive. The author will spend several paragraphs talking about some insignificant detail, and it happens frequently. Something else that bothers me about this story is that it comes off as trying too hard to make the MC "manly." It just doesn't work.

It's good, it's funny and I guess some f#cking guys dislike it but it's great to me. Pretty good and entertaining, second best of the current trial read selection for me but still amazing!

Yo, might as well review, which I rarely do.Characters funnny and original. I love them all.Story development good as well, not to fast, not to slowUpdates are good.World building is amazing, it was clearly well thoughtout.Would Recommend.

This novel has basically been stealing views by stealing and cropping the covers of popular novels and hoping readers get confused. Not cool.

This author could write their to-do list and still manage to make it interesting to read. Everything, from characterisation to adjectives implored in this work of art, is magnificent. I cannot praise the writer enough. Marco’s story is heart-wrenching, whole-hearted and full of tears. The characters he meets along his journey to (fingers-crossed) find peace will send you on your own trip to agony land. It is so worth it. Give this book a read and a half - I guarantee you won’t be disappointed.

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