After retiring from the underworld, I entered an infinite game. - Reviews

Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! ??

Everythings good. But you know. This guy. He chuckles. Chuckles. Chuckles..... And... Chuckles and keeps on chuckling. Sometimes it's not just him. Yeah. They chuckles. And chuckles. Hmmmm. Anyway giid story. Could have better writing quality. Thats it. Keep it up. Love the story.

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Interesting concept so far, I've read up till chapter 34 so what is to be said going forward is only relevant up till those chapters.Recommendations to the author:1. Get someone to edit your chapters, doesn't have to be a professional editor. In fact, you could also pass it through an application that checks that type of thing automatically. Some misspelled words that are fundamental to the stories development and world background, such as Devine (Divine). As well as some normal misspelling, like: rediculous instead of ridiculous and their when it should be there. Anyways, those are some ****** examples.2. Fix some verb tenses to match with the correct english grammar to make the story flow better.3. Would recommend an overhaul on your sentence structures to make them "smoother". Example, instead of "It was summer. The sun was hot and bright. In the Wissian town there was a colosseum. In the colosseum a fight is happenning between the two magicians. The crowd is cheering for their respective supporting fighters" It was summer and the sun was shining strongly upon the colosseum located in the town of Wissian; where two magicians where currently dueling making the crowd go wild, while cheering for their favored fighter. Excuse my grammar mistakes, even though I am criticizing I am not necessarily a good writer. I think that if you made those corrections your story would be so much better. Nevertheless, it's a very interesting story which I will continue to read since it has got interesting concepts and . So kudos to the author.

I'm tired of this scenario. You are not a god, you are ahead just because you have acquired these abilities, otherwise your destiny is to die in pain. As someone who loves evil mc, this novel is 0.

Good story. i am lovin' it. i am waiting next chapters of Nick's magic stories with his family. I am falling in love with Jess. be patient woman.

Mc being god in his zone destroys all the fun in it. I can imagine better things to to than him and it feels boring

Pan Yue whipped out his fan and brushed it. "You may be wrong Lady Hazel. The Eastern people have been extremely gracious, but they also saw value in alliance with Jin. Letting the emperor go without fulfilling his requests may bite back at them in the future."

Archive spends a few seconds, aiming to pinpoint the direction with her arm.

" Okay son , I tell you something ."

Maya followed and the middle-aged man entered soon after. But just as they had entered, the dungeon gate started to dim down from its former glow. Every one of the other members was flabbergasted.

Does a 24 hit combo on one opponent and at the very end, gives off a Burst that will probably send even the strongest opponent flying