Aegis Group Dangerous Ladies - Reviews

I've dropped this novel at the point when they are building the boat. I won't talk about the good parts of the story as they have been mentioned in many reviews, but only what i didn't like about it. First thing i didn't t like is the MC. His actions and they way he plays don't feel to me like an old mans at his 60s-70s, bases on how seriously he acts and plays the game. Secondly, the pacing of the story is bad. On the one hand,  the story doesnt stay stagnant and things do happen, wether its crafting, fighting or interacting with people in the game(npcs or players). On the other hand, its ~200 chapters and the GAME is not even open for the public, and from some other review its not at ~400 chapters either. Lastly, i don't like the game you created. For me multiplayer games comes hand to hand with competition, whether thats pvp or getting a first clear on a dungeon. And your game destroys any chance of competition the further it goes. You have players with literally months of advantage before the game opens, 5 of them that are destined to be the best of the 5 elements of the game from the very start and then you get all 5 of them together to form a guild. How is anyone gonna compete with that? Moreover, the "slots" for the main questline are filled before even the game goes live.The first plotline has to do about the war of two sides if dragons through their champions and 2 of the "good" ones have already been picked by chapter 200. What made me drop the novel was that lack of fairness and chance for the general player to compete for any kind of lead in the game.

so far pretty good, story feels smooth and easy to read, events make "sense" and dont feel rushed, so grammar and writing is good mc feels intelligent and quick to adapt, so please keept it that way.id also really like to see a zombie survival novel with a necromancer, but thats just a suggestiongood story so far

I liked it, wasnt just a fulfillment story like most other novels, especially recent trial reads, i also enjoyed night ranger despite its ending, normally I'd do a proper review but im biased. If you like system storys based around shamelessness then you'll probably enjoy it. Its not a full on combat novel as well, fortunately.

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It like the mentality of the protagonist is of current society , he glares at a robot,he goes in a market which is exactly like our current stores,talkes about uploading consciousness but has to walk to a store and they need bot guards with plasma rifles, also the store robot has a submissive voice, more like exact ideology of current world with high technology even that technology is thought with pathetic standard ,I m only giving it 3 stars on 3 Ch if it improves I will Improve the rating.

Maybe a bit too early to make a review, but I decided to make one for now. Great MC, I like his character and the story line. The writing quality is very good along with the world building. You have the right to be biased since it's your work. Yet, don't make it easier for the MC despite the fact that he had died once and now had a host system.

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Shadow Clones lv7

"I understand Chif "

Hi guys Ivory here Kinda shameless of me to write a review on my own novel but i just wanted to drop in and say hi :) also a little more back story on our main character Kalida his name is acctually a reference to the word Calida in spanish which means hot and khalida which translates to deathless or immortal in latin. Our protag personality is a slum dwelling deviant who is both cunning and funny at times, due to that he learnt to do anything to survive in this huge industrial city. Anyway thats enough from me if you guys enjoyed the first chapter drop a like and subscribeto the novel?